I am really enjoying this story. I was a little hesitant to begin with but you have done it justice. I love how Daniel has evolved and I can really see this of him. also love the conversation between him and sam. Can't wait to see more. Would love to see Dawn's reaction when she finds out that Daniel slept with Faith, though from how Dawn is in this she would likely suggest a threesome. keep up the great work. look forward to seeing more soon.
Review By [aussiemel] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I just had to read this again, needed a good laugh. Funny I've always thought of Willow as being a submissive, not Dawn. I normally think of her as being a dominant person. This is just as good as the last time I read it only a few months ago. I still find it funny that Dawn talks to herself.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [30 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I am really liking this dark side of Daniel, a lot. And you always knew Dawn would too. It's an interesting take of the sarcophagus side effects, to be sure.
Oh God this was so funny. Dawn acting like a bitch in heat and liking being spanked. I hope you add some more to this story. I can see how it could stretch out to become almost a novel in length, especially if it involved interaction with Faith and/or Xander. I'll keep watching for any additions to this story.
It's great, thanks for sharing it.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [26 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
HAHAHA! Im luving this story. It is so for the good! And I luv how you are making Daniel all into the hurt and sex theme going on! Please keep with it, I want to know what happens!!
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [12 Aug 10] • Not Rated
at the end i smiled, funny sex games, it is soo only funny in the scooby sense of family. and then i thought for a second and i lost my smile, rape isn't funny. but you warned us at the beginning that this would be a dark fic. i would really like to ccontinue reading this fic, please write some more
oh shit, whatever Daniel's thinkin is gonna make Dawn's butt hurt ALOT!
Talk about miscontruing a conversation especially after Dawn chewed him out about the sex smell ( and that's b4 she finds out, it was with Faithie!!! ) - definitely didn't see that one comin
Oh, Oh Lucy you's got some splainin' to do :)))
Love the story and the way you've drawn out these characters , can't wait for more
