Oooh, nice little collection of drabbles. I loved, loved, loved #3...Jesse's great because we never got enough to really get the character. But I loved the idea in that one. Humm...
Comments from author:
Thank you, thank you!
I have every intention of expanding on #3. It has been bouncing around in my head for quite some time.
Review of chapter "What He Does Best" from Kiwikatipo
Review:
God poor Hank, always portrayed as the bad guy except in normal again.
I enjoyed these family snippets you wrote.
Comments from author:
I was actually not trying to go for Hank being the bad guy here. Unfortunately with only 100 words to play with I'm not able to get everything out that needs to be said. I was trying to explain why he left, why he ran and never looked back, and hopefully that was gotten through.
Thanks for the review!!
Review By [Kiwikatipo] • Date [4 May 07] • Not Rated