But she didn't have time for them, casually knocking them aside with flicks of her hands, not even caring that her hair and eyes were blazing pure white with the magic she could no longer control.
great scene!
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Nice beginning. I'm glad to see that you're writing a sequel. I really enjoyed this, and I hope the next part also gives a little more backstory for the City's consciousness, and Willow's adventures in Joining. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. I've been slowly working on the sequel, but other stories keep coming by and distracting me. It will hopefully be done some day soon. :)
Review By [FireFlash] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Nice beginning. I'm glad to see that you're writing a sequel. I really enjoyed this, and I hope the next part also gives a little more backstory for the City's consciousness, and Willow's adventures in Joining. :)
Review By [FireFlash] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Not Rated
wow...do you think you'll add more to this story or a sequel? Because it would be awesome if you did!
Comments from author:
I actually have part of a sequel written, but it's not complete yet. (And I don't like to post WIPs.) Hopefully I can find the inspiration to finish it sometime in the near future. Thanks. :)
Review By [Mwhahahaha] • Date [21 Aug 08] • Not Rated
You must write a sequel, I love this story and I just need to know how it continues. Absolutely can't wait to see how Willow/Atlantis tries to explain magic. Now please sit down and start working... puppy dog eye's.
Comments from author:
Ack! Not the puppy dog eyes!!
I actually do have part of the next one written, but so many other stories demanded attention that it got lost in the sheer mass. I'm hoping to get back to it soon. :)
Review By [Terapsina] • Date [11 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Loved this story. i want to know if you are going to update this at all. this could be a long story that will be great. I think that you should make it a Willow/Ronon Dex fanfic i have not seen a story like that yet.
Just think about it.
Cheree
Comments from author:
Not so much 'update' as 'write sequel'. I have it started and kinda planned out, but that's all. I *do* plan to continue it, though.
Oh, that's lovely. Chapter one in the voice of Atlantis was beautiful. This has the feel of a lead in to an epic. How do you feel about writing another few thousand pages?
Comments from author:
Thanks - I'm glad you enjoyed it. I have plans for more, but whether I get around to finishing it anytime soon is debatable. (Other plot bunnies keep distracting me.)
Review By [McGuffin] • Date [9 Sep 07] • Not Rated
I saw that you will continue this eventually, I just hope eventually comes soon. Great writing and I'll be looking forward to the next part.
Comments from author:
I've actually started writing the next part, but real life has been keeping me more occupied recently, so very little writing has been done. Thanks. :)