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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)deiticlast
Review:
Oh, god, please tell me you're gonna do more with this! This was fantastic, and I would love to read more.
Comments from author:
I've got a couple ideas as to how to follow this up. It's just a matter of finding the time to write them. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [(Current Donor)deiticlast] • Date [12 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Heheh. Great start for a new series.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

Might have something new for this soon, if the muse cooperates.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [25 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LFW
Review:
Nice Dawn2.0
With that ending you need to have another story
So, does this make Xander Dawn's Watcher?
Definitely Andy's boss; probably equal with the Director
If nothing else, Xander is a great field op, maybe get him some training with Dawn?
More please
Comments from author:
Thanks.

As for your question about Watchers, Buffy pointed out he had been watching Dawn's ass for a while now. ;-)

And Xander isn't really anyone's boss, he's more the field team leader, since he does have much more field experience than either Dawn or Andrew possess. For example, when it comes to research or technical expertise, he would most definitely defer to either Dawn or Andrew, depending upon exactly what was involved.

And all three of them are going to be getting a lot more field experience and training in working together in the future.
Review By [LFW] • Date [6 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ame
Review:
*snicker* Nice job!
I like how Dawn managed to crash Xander's brain..
And honestly? I think that there is a lot of potential for good things to come of this story.
I mean a Xander/ Dawn paring just to start with..
Though I must admit I've only seen like 3 episodes of this series...
Oh well keep them coming!
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it. And an X/D pairing is what you'll see if and when I follow up on this story.
Review By [Ame] • Date [6 May 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
I like it, but I think Xander would be
more then a little irritated with Buffy
giving him another lap dance like she
did last time.
Comments from author:
I like to think that they managed to resolve that little problem over the course of the following years, off-screen. At least they did in this universe.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [6 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from littleoldme
Review:
When Xander calls Dawn "dawnstar," is it supposed to be pronounced "Dawn Star?" If so, why exactly is he calling her that? It seems a little lyrical for a Xander nickname. In the canon, he did call her "Dawnster" occasionally, but that's spelled with an e.

Cute fic overall. It's nice to see Dawn get some powers- wish we could have seen her interact with Jake more.
Comments from author:
I always thought he was calling her Dawnstar as a comic reference to the Legion of Superheroes character of the same name, so that's what I use.

Glad you liked it, otherwise.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [6 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Okay.. yeah. Got the crossover. I thought some of this was rushed... in the original story Jake worked for NSA already... and this was appearently an NSA lab. So if Dawn was really interning for a government agency -- but hiding that fact -- I would like to have seen this info from sommeone's perspective. Also, would have liked to have seen how the agents in Jake's group adjusted to the existance of the supernatural and that maybe they'd be the ones to fight it. On a minor note, I see you have Dawn become more statuesque than MT, but it is mentioned in passing and not followed up on. Willow, then is also flirted with a statuesque brunette... and there's really no distinction. So... okay, but not your best.
Comments from author:
In reality, the NSA doesn't have any actual field agents as portrayed in the show, so I made some minor changes in the story line to indicate a more likely source for their employer. The other points you make about the other agents' reactions to the supernatural will be addressed if and when I follow up with other stories.

And I was using the term statuesque in the dictionary's sense of "like or suggesting a statue, as in massive or majestic dignity, grace, or beauty," so referring to someone in that way doesn't necessarily mean that Dawn's physically overly well-endowed, just that she is quite noticeable for her beauty.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [6 May 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Methos
Review:
i'm actually really impressed with this fic so far... bringing the two (three?) worlds together is done seamlessly, and hopefully paves the way for a Xander / Dawn relationship... and maybe a Jake / Buffy relationship too...

hmm, bonus points if you can get Willow and tech support Diane Hughes together :)

all in all, can't wait for more of this one, definitely going on my 'tracking' list

if you ever need someone familer with the Jake 2.0 universe, my e~mail address is on my profile, don't hesitate to give me a shout

M
Comments from author:
If and when I come back to this, it will be a Xander/Dawn 'ship story. I do like the other suggestions you've made, and will see what my muse thinks about them.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [(Past Donor)Methos] • Date [6 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from anubiswillrule
Review:
Finally, a good writer makes a foray into the underused fandom of Jake 2.0. One thing I would like to see is some further detail on the interaction between the characters. Especially the Jake 2.0.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the good words. ;-)

I have nothing definite planned at the moment, but some vague ideas are floating around the back of my head.
Review By [anubiswillrule] • Date [6 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [6 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mithrilandtj
Review:
COOL!!!
Do more!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks. And probably, eventually.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [6 May 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent story which I totally enjoyed. I like seeing a more mature Dawn and your Xander was a hoot. I hope you return to this universe some time as it has potential for lots of action and laughs. Not to mention lots of things going BOOM! in a most satisfactory manner.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. At present, I have no definite plans for anything more with this group, but there are some vague ideas stirring in the back of my head.

Glad to hear you enjoyed it.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [6 May 07] • Not Rated
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