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Review of chapter "The Demon Murphy" from Gideon
Review:
Great chapter! Definitely a better info dump than most i have read :) It is fun when Dawn joins in the good times of Halloween isn't it?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Demon Murphy" from rocky
Review:
A cliffhanger for three years? You Suck!!!
Review By [rocky] • Date [27 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Memorable Halloween" from Vathara
Review:
"Because the bullets destroyed the bust, they had to exist."

...Magical causality. I've read that bit a half-dozen times, and that's one of the BEST arguments I've ever heard for the Halloween spell sticking. Very cool!
Comments from author:
Coming from you, that means a lot. :)

Glad you like it.
Review By [Vathara] • Date [21 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Demon Murphy" from JediKnight
Review:
Good job on this so far, please add more to this story soon.
Will you bring in more of "Stargate: SG-1" at some point since you mentioned "Wormhole X-treame"?
Comments from author:
Oops, sorry. I forgot to update the summary on this one. Its currently on hiatus so I can read more of the source material for Trinity Blood. I'd planned to keep writing on it as I saw more of the Anime, and then I found out there *was* no more Anime because the creator of the series dropped dead before he finished it.

Once I've read more of the background material I'll see about getting back into the swing of that story, but for the moment IND has my primary attention.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [11 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Demon Murphy" from GundumM
Review:
it's cool
Review By [GundumM] • Date [16 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Demon Murphy" from Traveler
Review:
I join my wishes with the other people requesting that you please continue this story. It is well written and even though I am unfamiliar with the crossovers I am eager to see how this story develops.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!
Unfortunately my muse isn't prodding me about this one at the moment. Plus I need to read more of the Trinity Blood background material so I don't screw anything else up. It'll probably be several months until I hit AMH again.
Review By [Traveler] • Date [3 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Demon Murphy" from Blend
Review:
Amazing story!

I hope to read more of it in the future.

*dances*
Review By [Blend] • Date [23 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Demon Murphy" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Awesome stuff so far please update soon.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [17 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Memorable Halloween" from TalonPhoenix
Review:
Im wondering if Xander is still a Kruzik
Comments from author:
He mentions his nanites at the begining of chapter two, so, yes, he is still a Crusnik. However, because of Abel's history with the Crusnik nanomachines and the example of Cain, he is reluctant to use them.
Review By [TalonPhoenix] • Date [29 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Demon Murphy" from KingHenrytheV
Review:
This is a really fun story that places under-used characters in a key area. I love reading new things with BtVS characters (personally, I'm getting a little bored with them, and this story is refreshing).
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it! At first, I'd intended to bring Willow and maybe Oz in on the ground floor as well, but decided that thew impact would be greater using people that were more or less ignored in the story (Amy Jonathan) or underutilized (Dawn Xander). Thanks for reviewing, and I hope you like the next part.
Review By [KingHenrytheV] • Date [5 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Demon Murphy" from ThunderGod
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I like YAHF's...crossovers a must...this has started interesting, including background on each person..well asmuch as you have, I do hope to see little tidbits here and there appear in each chapter just so I can fully appreciate the characters.

ThunderGod
Review By [ThunderGod] • Date [11 May 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Demon Murphy" from Infinix
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Sweet there are all kinds of fun possibilities for this to go in. You might want to have your beta go over this one more time looking at the tense it is written in. It switches back and forth:

Jonathan immediately shoots a glare at the now silver-haired youth.

As soon as Jonathan passed out, the others had hauled ass to Amy’s place, which was as empty as promised with her dad away on business.

It isnt to bad but switching from past to present tense constantly can make it hard to read.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [10 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Demon Murphy" from Bobboky
Review:
hope for more
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [10 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Demon Murphy" from Krenn
Review:
Very good - I'm not too familiar with any of the three series mentioned, but this still catches my interest. The Fiery Steed symbiote sounds quite a bit like the one from the David Weber book Apocalypse Troll - have you read that?
Comments from author:
yes. Actually that was Vathara's inspiration for Shi no Yami. I know, cuz' I asked him. Thanks for the review!
Review By [Krenn] • Date [10 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Demon Murphy" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent work. I know this chapter was a big data dump, but I needed the background information and I thought you did a good job with both the data and the characters of Our Heroes as they explained things to each other and to us. Oh, I can't wait to see Giles, Buffy, and especially Joyce totally freak at the changes in Dawn. Lol! Now she is taller than Buffy and only a few years early. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [10 May 07] • Not Rated
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