This was such a good beginning, do you have any plan to continue this story, because I assure you if you do it will be well read and enjoyed by many. Please give us another chapter, thanks.
Review By [foreverdead] • Date [8 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Must say, this is one of the better short fic's I have read on this site. I must ask however, what the Latin is supposed to mean, the only latin I am familiar with is Ecclestical, which is somewhat older than the Classical you are apparently using.
Also, you might consider reading David Weber's "In Fury Born" for something to do for the next chapter.
Review By [Dedischado] • Date [14 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Beautiful story. I saw you name in the Crossing Over Awards and read your story License to Kill. It was so good that I had to go back and read the rest. Amazing writing. After reading them all, I have to say that I, Immortal is my favorite. I would love to see a continuation. But if not, just keep writing stories. Please. 8)
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for this comment - I just wanted to add that I love your work as well - "Life's ending..." is right up there in my current top 10. Currently I am rather distracted as I am workiing on a Criminal Minds fic but Phoenix and other Buffy possibilities are always quietly simmering somewhere in the back of my mind. So I'll make you a pact -you keep producing work of your usual high quality and and I'll just try and keep up with you!
Cheers again.
Review By [becuzitswrong] • Date [14 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Cooool, I know I am not in the position to make pleas for a continuation, seeing as I have what feels like five million unfinished things. But I am begging you shamelessly, please please update this.
Review By [feekh] • Date [3 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Well! That was rather... I guess 'lovely' is the word, if a guy can use that word without it sounding too strange. Very nice. I'll be watching, in case you keep going with it.
Review By [DreamSmith] • Date [21 Oct 07] • Not Rated
I just... gah. You tend to leave me in a pile of gah and mush and flail, every time. I'm torn between saying "OMG YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT THERE!", and telling you to leave it there so I can imagine and live in the possibilities presented. Plus, Phoenix and Fire!!
But this was lovely and brilliant, and I would love to see more. But I will completely understand if I don't. I just have to read it again now.
p.s. thankyou, from the bottom of my heart, for not using any phonetic spelling of "tomato".
Review By [Smurfette] • Date [9 May 07] • Not Rated