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Review of chapter "Dawn's Excellent Adventure" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great series of shorts, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [6 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawn's Excellent Adventure" from (Moderator)Ava
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Yay for Dawnie being smarter then the average bear...er...person. Is it wrong that I thought of Bill and Ted after I read her last comment to Teal'c? ;)
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [5 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Top This" from WritinginCT
Review:
bwhahaha.... Jack SO needs someone to play with like this ;D And I volunteer to sooth Daniel's ruffled feathers ;D
Comments from author:
You'll have to share Daniel with me and a believe Ava who reviewed below you. ;-)

I'm sure Jack and Xander would have a blast on a mission together. The others might want to kill them by the end though...

Thanks for the review!!
Review By [WritinginCT] • Date [10 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Top This" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
While you keep Jack and Xander distracted playing one-ups I'm gonna borrow Daniel. I'll return him in one piece...probably.

I'm still adoring this little glimpse and the Xander/Jack interaction felt right. Two thumbs up!!
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [9 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Top This" from (Moderator)jrabbit
Review:
Shouldn't that be "took over" rather than "overtook". Or was it in the slow lane on the interstate?

*ducks*
Comments from author:
*glares*

'Took over' is two words. 'Overtook' is one word... Math prevails over grammar when talking about drabbles. ;-)

*goes to ponder rewording...*


EDIT: All fixed... :-)
Review By [(Moderator)jrabbit] • Date [9 May 07] • Not Rated
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