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Review of chapter "chapter two" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Love the idea of Xander and Buffy as the children of Sam and Jack (suits them both) and growing up loved and supported this time around (though Buffy's mom certainly loved her, it's hard to deny that her father's defection left some wounds, and let's not even get started on the deficiencies of the Harris parents). And Rupert and Willow as the children of Daniel and Janet seems oddly appropriate, too.

Looking forward to reading the rest of this series.
Comments from author:
thanks for the review (:
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [27 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter two" from nightslayer
Review:
cute!
Comments from author:
thanks!
Review By [nightslayer] • Date [29 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from zili
Review:
This is actually really cute. Oh and one small side note when a baby is born their eyes are some shade of blue before changing to their actual color.
Comments from author:
thanks!
i didn't know that eye colour could change when you're a baby.
Review By [zili] • Date [25 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter two" from amusewithaview
Review:
*Evil Giggle* Xander is the oldest, eh? Does that mean he'll be giving Rupes dating advice?!

This looks like a fun crossover and I can't wait to read more!

Danke
Comments from author:
thanks for the review!
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [12 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter two" from Infinix
Review:
Nice work. So I am assuming this will take the form of the shortlived Stargate cartoon, SGC 20-25 years in the future?
Comments from author:
Thanks!
I have never watched the cartoon- you're talking about Stargate: Infinity, right?
The next story in the series will be about the kids first day of Kindergarten, eventually the story will be about their futures in the SGC.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [10 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter two" from littleoldme
Review:
Excellent! A long time ago, someone took my "reincarnated" challenge (http://www.tthfanfic.org/Challenge-1371/The+Reincarnation+Challenge.htm) using Stargate characters as the parents, but they took the story down, and I've always wanted to see someone else's take on it. I think the last story had Cordelia, Anya, and I don't remember who else, so it's nice to see a slightly different take. I think the kiddo I'm most excited about is Buffy, because there are ways in which she's unexpected as an O'Neill child. Xander obviously has Jack's sense of humor, and Willow and Giles are the obvious choices for Daniel's children, but Buffy is a neat mix of Sam and Jack, withh something COMPLETELY different thrown in.

I hope you show us the similarities AND the differences between the kids and their parents- like playing up Willow's babble and playful sides. I'm excited to see more and hope you update soon!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
My flawed grammar skills seemed to be playing up in this fic, do you know anyone who could beta my story?
'Cause i don't want to get it so bad that it needs to be taken off the site.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [10 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter two" from littleoldme
Review:
Fun fic!
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [10 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter two" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
thanks!!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from aarne
Review:
Sorry, don't know anyone who could be a beta. I don't have one and English is my third language so I try to manage with what I have learned in school. Maybe someone should ask the admins if they could add a feature where people could ask for a beta or list themselves as free to be one? I'm sure there are few writers who would want a beta.
Comments from author:
That would definitely be cool!
Review By [aarne] • Date [9 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from djhardim
Review:
Nice. I think Rupert should have been born first though, then Xander.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [djhardim] • Date [9 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter two" from aarne
Review:
Great start for the series. Keep going.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
My grammar skills happen to be a pretty bad in this fic, do you know anyone who can beta my story?
Review By [aarne] • Date [9 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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