Review of chapter "Lessons and pain" from Missingviolet
Review:
THESE are pretty AWESOME too!!!
Will there be any updates in the new future?
Comments from author:
hehe, thanks, but I kind of lost the inspiration for that one, there might come a new chapter when I feel like it, but I cannot say when that might be.
Review By [Missingviolet] • Date [28 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Typo is in brackets. BTW this typo appears multiple times.
***************************** Faith stepped forward and [graped] Ron by his collar and lifted him up till his feet couldn't touch the floor. Ron gave an high pitched squeak and paled.
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Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [11 Aug 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lessons and pain" from deathgeonous
Review:
This is total insanity here. I like it. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [6 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lessons and pain" from darkmagician
Review:
Did you also have coffee? *takes away donuts and coffee* You're as bad as Willow. You might want to work on the layout of your last two chapters. Your paragraphs are all chopped up. The hilarity is still strong.
Comments from author:
I checked the paragraphs, thanks for the advice, it should be better now!
Review By [darkmagician] • Date [9 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lessons and pain" from Susangel
Review:
Loool!This story is really great to lift the morals up!
Review By [Susangel] • Date [10 Jun 09] • Not Rated
I knew a sugar rush had to be involved in this story. Just didn't realize it came from the writers. 50 lbs. medicine balls though?
Review By [mmooch] • Date [25 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Smoking dogs and teachers affection" from mmooch
Review:
OMG! The hat screaming on Dawn's head! I just about choked on my SweetTart. And the deal with Snape and Pansy...I can't stop laughing. It's giving me a headache.
Review By [mmooch] • Date [25 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Old rich men and craziness" from mmooch
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I would almost feel sorry for Draco being in Dawn's sights, but hey, he needs someone to fear.
Review By [mmooch] • Date [25 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Melting frogs and burning Weasels" from mmooch
Review:
I bet they've never heard of ADD in the wizarding community, but they're sure getting a firsthand taste of it now! They are going to need a large supply of headache medicine to deal with them.
Review By [mmooch] • Date [25 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Dumbdoor to Walmart" from mmooch
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They're not even happy with only mocking outsiders, they have to torture each other as well. Actually, that makes a lot of sense. Ooo, Dawnie has powers now too. That should prove funny. And everyone paling at the mention of those the Slayers have been close to and fought should be good for a few laughs.
Review By [mmooch] • Date [25 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
The comparisons of 'You-Know-Who' to some of Sunnydale's Big Bads...Hey, that would be an interesting cage match! And the deatheaters being called 'minions' - what an insult to their pure-blooded egos. Oh geez, there's too many funny things to list them all. But Faith getting on her knees to beg Buffy has to be at the top.
Review By [mmooch] • Date [25 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Wow! Faith and Willow? There's a different pairing. 'Weak spot' ...LOL! Faithie is getting quite the little collection of sticks from the rude men who can't even turn green. But she didn't take it; what a bummer.
Review By [mmooch] • Date [25 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Hulk who tried to eat the Boy-who-lives" from mmooch
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Pet books...only the Sunnydale crew would do that! Picking on the Trio? They must think the girls are Slytherins - except for that whole 'not witches' thing. Aww, poor Buffy. She had to have a moment of seriousness because of Hermoine's lecture on the Hellmouth.
Review By [mmooch] • Date [25 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
