"Legolas looks not at my brothers, but down at her, and I do not think I am the only one who sees his fingers lightly brush her cheek.
Disaster."
----"Another one bites the dust. And another one down, another one down, another one bites the dust"
All elves seem to fall in Buffy's wake. Do they even know her name? Cause no one seems to use it.
I NEED MORE, please. This was wonderful.
A little irritated that no one seems to realize that Buffy is the one who defeated all those orcs (well, Rumil and Haladir might). Hmm. Can't wait for Legolass to reveal that no, he and his men did not kill all those orcs-that they suspect it was lovley little green-eyed lass.
Please, update soon! I love these stories!
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [18 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Ooh-Buffy is like a human Aphrodite; everyone seems to either fall in love with her, or want to be near her to protect or befriend her. Even orcs-although, I think they are on the more lusty, drink her blood side.
Great chapter.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [18 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Love-love this! The imagery you create is just so strong and as a reader it really sets the emotions and scenes right in front of you. Looking forward to what is coming.
Review By [Lisa] • Date [14 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from MarbleGlove
Review:
Man, this whole series is wonderful and heartwrenching. I look forward to each addition you post. Keep writing.
Review By [MarbleGlove] • Date [14 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Oh boy the power of the Buffy attraction strikes again. LOL This is so interesting and I am so curious about where this is heading and what will happen next. Please update again soon.
Review By [FireDragon] • Date [13 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I really love your vivid descriptions. The way you described the battle scenes was well done. I wonder what hold Buffy has on the Elves? Sort of Slayer love potion?