I just love the concept of both Dawn as a Winchester and Sam as a Summers. Dawn should have been a hunter, but no matter, she should have had a normal life and that is what she got and deserved. Is Sam the Key and is Dawn psychic with Demon blood in her or the opposite? Please update soon!!!!!
Review By [FAITHFUL] • Date [21 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This is an interesting story so far. I've just started watching Supernatural, and then I found all the Supernatural crossovers here on TTH, and I had to check it out and stumbled across your story. I'm liking it so far and I hope you continue!
Oh Fuck! Buffy and Sam's Aunt is Ellen! *giggles and snorts* That's going to be fun explaining to the number one mother hen "My babies aren't hunting" mother that her 20 yr old niece is the slayer and that her nephew has been doing research for his big sister.
Comments from author:
Oh yeah, and there will lots of Jo whining going on. Thanks for the review!
Mike Summers is Joyce's father? Did Hank take Joyce's name when they married? Is Alex a boy with curly black hair or a black boy with curly hair?
I love the different interactions between the sibling pairs. It's obvious you really considered how the change would affect relationships.
Comments from author:
Okay, I actually wrote Mike Preston in the beginning but by accident changed it to Summers in the next sentence. However to explain, Joyce calling him dad; my parents call my grandparents mom and dad. It just shows a close family relationship. But it is originally a mistake, I'll try to correct it without having to upload it again.
And Alex really had no clear description, so you can just interpret him how you see him in your own head. But yes, there is a word missing there. So, another mistake.
I'll try to be more cautious of them in the future. Thanks for the review!
Review By [sosaith] • Date [28 Oct 08] • Not Rated
I'm really loving this- I think you've done a great job with the subtle changes to each of the canons- like the fact that John didn't turn Dawn into a hunter (goes well with that football line that I wanted to smack John and Dean for first chapter- girls can play, too, fellas!), and the way this has played out with Dean and Dawn not being estranged. Their back-and-forth was hilarious, and I'm looking forward to seeing how protective Dean is over his little sister, when he was already protective over Sammy. And speaking of Sam, I love the insults that Sam and Buffy traded back and forth- especially "Big Foot" and "Barbie." Hee!
I hope you're inspired to update soon. I love!
Comments from author:
Reviews like yours make my day! You are so sweet, thank you so much. I'm glad you caught the little differences, and sorry about the football line. I'll kick John's butt later.
I'm really excited about this story and I'm glad you are too.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [27 Oct 08] • Not Rated
I like the premise of this story - everyone's family relationships are going to do some serious changing if Dawn and Sam are in one another's places. Dean would be more protective of a baby sister, I'd think, and the Winchesters in general would probably object a lot less strongly if Dawn said she wanted to go to college; Buffy would probably treat Sam the same way she treated Dawn except without the girl fights over borrowing clothes and what not. Anyway, I hope there's more of this coming.
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [23 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Ooh! That was a great beginning! I can't wait to see where you go with this. The only catch is that Dean really can't make fun of Dawn acting like a girl, since she is one... Anyway, this fic is off to a wonderful start!
Comments from author:
It was your idea I just put it down on paper, so to speak. Thanks for the review, I hope you enjoy reading it.
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [13 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This is a pretty interesting concept and start. I look forward to seeing how Dawn turned out being raised by John and Dean. How Sam deal's with being the brother of a slayer.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I might make Sam a little bit whiny, kinda like Dawn was in Season 5 (and parts of Season 6) but he'll still be our lovebale Sammy and Dean will, as always, remain Dean.
Review By [soleil] • Date [13 May 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I like. Looking forward to seeing the dynamic between Dawn/ Dean and Buffy/ Sam as siblings (love that rivalry thing!).
Danke
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'll definitely have more of that since it's how I think a brother and sister would act, or at least that's how I act (sometimes) with my brother.
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [13 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I love the story idea, and even though we didn't really see much different from the canon (other than the swapping of the babies' names), I feel like I'm going to like the story as well. It would be easier to read, though, if you watched out for a few grammatical things in the future. First off, if one character is addressing another, you need a comma before/after the name- ie "Hey, Dawnie, blah blah blah" or "What do you think, Buffy?" You're missing a couple of these commas in your story, and it makes it read rougher than it would if you watched the grammar. Same goes for capitalization. In American English (assuming that's what you speak), you capitalize the first word after a quotation mark, unless it's a continuation of a sentence started in an earlier quote. So you can say:
"Sam," Buffy said sternly, "what are you doing?"
But you can't just say:
Buffy said, "hey Sam."
This happens several times, too. A beta would be of the good, but even just spell check should catch these things at least most of the time.
Comments from author:
Thanks a lot, I actually hadn't noticed those mistakes but I will in the future. It will be a little canon but I won't go into detail because rewriting actual dialogue from either shows is tiring.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [13 May 07] • Not Rated