Review of story "By the light of the moon" from Anonymous Reviewer
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i like this. now you know you have a fan. so write more! yes. dominant willow = goodness
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [7 Jul 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "By the light of the moon" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Lookin vantastic'o *grins*!!! I love the whole switching from Willow's to Richard's point of view. Honey & Oats!!!
~Nakita~
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [6 Jul 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "By the light of the moon" from Anonymous Reviewer
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this is an awsome story.keep writing
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [2 Jul 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "By the light of the moon" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Don't want to be mean or anything but Richard hates coffee. I can't see him sitting down and drinking it, I have some other complaints but they're pretty minor and I don't want to be too hard on you. Other then that you have a good plot but I should warn you that almost all the Richard/Willow pairings have Willow as a lycanthrope so you're going to have to write something that is different if you want more readers to be interested.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [30 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "By the light of the moon" from Anonymous Reviewer
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the only thing that glaringly goes against the anita blake books is Richard drinking coffee. He HATES coffee. There's a whole little thing in one of the earlier books with Anita joking that it's his only fault. Other than that, you're doing pretty well for only having read one book. Nice story!
nicola
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [30 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "By the light of the moon" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Looking good *grins*!!! So is she going to exept her beast or reject like Richard? Write more, please. Honey & Oats!!!
~Nakita~
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [30 Jun 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment