Awesome story! The plot was completely original and funny too. I loved the banter between Sheppard and Rodney and Sheppard, Rodney and their kids. Well done! I really enjoyed it!
As for a sequel, hell yes, I would love to read more! *grins*
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [16 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Wow, that was great! I loved the interaction between the dads and girls in all their permutations. I'd love to see Rodney and John's conversation on the other side of that meeting and how the fact that these are probably the women they're happily(?) married to in almost 20 years changes or reinforces their early impressions. I'd also love to see how Debunk!Rodney and Uberwicca!Willow fight and scrap and soothe until they get together. And wow, how gentled is Faith now if she's going to be married and have kids in a year and change? How far after Chosen are they and please could Faith and Sheppard have a bunch of kids? That would be too funny, that the laid-back total hotness duo with no family to speak of could turn into the Waltons. I'd love to see that transformation. What about Xander? Would he be more likely to match up with Teyla or Elizabeth? No, wait, Lindsay Novak! I see lots of interesting vignettes still to explore in this universe and I'd love to see more if you get inspired.
Review By [jennzabelle] • Date [25 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
"So... anyone else want to see more of this 'verse?" Yes please! This was both cute and funny, and made me LOL even though it's late at night and I should really be quiet... :~D
Review By [Waterfall] • Date [4 Feb 08] • Not Rated