Review of chapter "1. Lost and Found" from SusanAnthony
This is an interesting concept and one that has a lot of potential. Ginny as the daughter of Angelus and Darla will stir up alot of trouble no doubt. Why were the Scourge of Europe so friendly though? How is their history different from cannon?
Review By [SusanAnthony
] • Date [16 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "1. Lost and Found" from Lin
The story needs some work, its jumbled and rushed. Also i'm having trouble believing your explanation as to why the Weasleys took her in, They already had a lot of kids and were struggling with money. Why would they take on another kid, even if dumbledore asked them to. Why not some other wizarding family?
Review By [Lin
] • Date [15 May 07] • Not Rated