Review of chapter "Chapter One" from rivrgrl
i love the attempt. it gives me all sort of ideas. and i would really love it if you're friend decided to post his/her story here. even if it's less then perfect it seems like a great read.
Review By [rivrgrl
] • Date [15 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Coldhands
Pretty. And very orange. Is she in the ZPM? or powering it or something? Now I'm all interested.
You should try to convince your friend to post their story (TTH is great place to start, especially if they're shy about their work).
Comments from author:
I might convince her once she catches up on the Sg stuff she's only seen Rodney centric episodes. Backwards weaning based on a great love of David Hewlett. She's an Eng major. one of those sticklers for all the details of writing, things like accurate characterization. The story basically goes Rodney thinks he found a device to repower a Zpm and uses it. It really just uses the essences of exiled ascended who do not retake human form. Buffy however being Supernaturally inclined does a ghost in the machine bit and the more the Zpm is used the more she gets herself into Atlantis' systems. So you're very close on both parts. No, the story is not complete. Thank you for the comment on the pic. ^_^
Review By [Coldhands
] • Date [15 May 07] • Not Rated