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Review of chapter "What the Hell" from JEHayes
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You should use full sentences. Yeah, using fragments occasionally can be effective for various things. The thing is that you're using them way more than just occasionally and you're not using them to effect. They just break the flow, snap me out of the story, and force me to waste time trying to figure out what you're saying.

It's a cool, certainly uncommon crossover though. Good luck in the future.
Review By [JEHayes] • Date [17 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What the Hell" from infraredphaeton
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I love it, wonderful stuff. Update soon, Yusuke and Botan seemed perfect, and your plot idea is different.
Write fast
Review By [infraredphaeton] • Date [21 Apr 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What the Hell" from AineSironaTsuki
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I'm loving it already. When do we get more?
Review By [AineSironaTsuki] • Date [9 Dec 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What the Hell" from spacey
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i like this so fat! it's a logical pairing, too. needs a .... oh, right, buffy season 1. n/m. i was gonna say a druscilla. and kuwabara, i think h3e'd really make sunnydle funny!
Review By [spacey] • Date [8 Feb 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What the Hell" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I love it, very funny and a great start! More soon!

Rose
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [19 Jul 03] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What the Hell" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Hi, don't knock yourself out over this one. I thought you did a great job of blending the shows. It's somewhat believeable, and the writing was decent too! I loved the attitude-clashing between young-buffy and yuske. heh..i can't spell his name either! Good job!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [15 Jul 03] • Not Rated
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