I just discovered this story, and all I've got to say is: More, more, more, please. I do hope Dawn gets over her fit of denial really soon since the Dark Lord is after her, and it would be nice to get some protection in place before she's kidnapped on Saturday. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review of chapter "Quidditch and Curses" from SwimmieTeam
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More NOW!!!
Review By [SwimmieTeam] • Date [1 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hogwarts?! Why me?!" from Skyefather
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just found this story and I must say:love it and I hate you. I'm writing one too and it's nowhere near as good as yours, so I'll just have to try harder and see if I can improve. you still have a few Grammar mistakes manly in the verb tense your using. remember too keep the same tense throughout the entire paragraph your writing.
you wrote: “No you don’t have to enjoy our win and I will see if I join you later. After I did a little bit of research.”
I think you meant to say something like: “No you don’t have to go with me, enjoy the party and I'll see if I can join you later. After I do a little bit of research into what that was I'll have to talk to Professor Dumbledore.”
Please take this in the spirt its meant, as constructive. cause I like this story and I hope you update soon. *hugs&kisses*
Review By [Skyefather] • Date [5 Feb 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Quidditch and Curses" from LovinXovers
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very good!!! keep it up :) you have just made me start writing a new chapter for my story.. xx
Comments from author:
Thank you, hey that's cool, I like inspiring people!
Review By [LovinXovers] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Puggirl, oh so... threatening!" from AshDawnSoulmates
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I love this story and I hope you update soon! At first I didn't really see how you'd be able to make it fit together but after reading it, it makes total sense and it is awesome!
Review By [AshDawnSoulmates] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Puggirl, oh so... threatening!" from Terapsina
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I am in love in your story please update soon!!!!!!!!!!! I give you 10 Sirella
Review By [Terapsina] • Date [30 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Puggirl, oh so... threatening!" from pickyoulife
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I like the direction this is going in you should continue with this story.
Review By [pickyoulife] • Date [14 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Puggirl, oh so... threatening!" from AriaDragoncrest
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