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Review of chapter "Finishing the Task/Home" from Avalonemyst
Review:
Pure awesomeness!
Review By [Avalonemyst] • Date [10 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Finishing the Task/Home" from Vickzie
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Fantastic story!
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [17 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finishing the Task/Home" from Rune
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I was trying to decide what rating to give 8 or 9? Well you got a 9 for completion. Its a good story, I'm not sure about how Dawn and Legolas make up but otherwise ok. You know the books were great, but the movie managed to make an improvement. It added more for Arwen, in the books she is a background character, mentioned but not developed. The movie gives her a chance to shine. Thanks for the story.
Review By [Rune] • Date [27 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Finishing the Task/Home" from AriaDeloncray
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Awesome story!
Review By [AriaDeloncray] • Date [22 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Waking Up Dead" from Chikageko
Review:
*Slams head repeatedly into desk*

Small question here, nice drama, well written angst, but did you think at all when you wrote this chapter? You started at the end of season 5 when dawn jumped, she had turned 16 only very recently at this point. She didn't face the first evil till her late 17th year, early 18th. That's season 7. Two years from now. How could she be 18 when a few hours ago she was 16 or know about the first evil or have gained a backbone that she wouldn't have had for another 2 or 1 years respectivly?
I don't care how much you want to butcher charactors or stories (Heavy AU's are often better in my opinion really) but you should at least keep your bloody timelines straight. You changed it no less than 7 times in one chapter! And this isn't even the complicated material!! Sodomize Jesus with a rusty ice pick why don't yah?
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [26 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finishing the Task/Home" from chickaboo
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What a fantastically wonderful story! Thank you so much for sharing it, I enjoyed every moment reading it!
Review By [chickaboo] • Date [28 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finishing the Task/Home" from Bluejello
Review:
*applause*
Interesting approach to the grown up-ish Dawn. I loved the story. The only problem I had was trying to figure out the Buffy timeline, that really confused me for the first couple of chapters.
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [4 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finishing the Task/Home" from AriaDeloncray
Review:
Great story!
Review By [AriaDeloncray] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finishing the Task/Home" from DirtyMindedPurity
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i love it very good. i know the basic story. and though i have tried i cant quite read the books. so now i wanna go rent the movies and watch them
Review By [DirtyMindedPurity] • Date [20 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Finishing the Task/Home" from lyc
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Just read this entire thing and I loved it.
Review By [lyc] • Date [9 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Finishing the Task/Home" from Dragonelf
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You have done a fantastic job with this story and I am certain that the sequel of this story will be equally great.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [18 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Finishing the Task/Home" from DruidLass
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Brilliantly done, I can't believe there aren't more reviews for this story!! I absolutely love your portrayal of Dawn. My heart broke for her when they betrayed her at Helm's Deep. You did a marvelous job with this story! Well done!! -Druid
Review By [DruidLass] • Date [16 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Finishing the Task/Home" from purrfus
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I found this story because of the 2006 CoA nominations. I can understand why your story was nominated. Your Dawn is very well done even though she really didn't have much to do.

Your writing and the insertion of Dawn into the story of LoTR was very well done. And that brings me to my major disappointment with this story - the majority of the work is insertion. I wont call it simply insertion because you did a good job with the pacing, but I think that less then 20% of the story is original. This fic appears to have been nominated for best romance based on that 20%, and the relationship was beautifully done; unfortunately that wasn't enough to overcome the insertion handicap.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [25 Nov 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Waking Up Dead" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
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I’ve faced the First Evil- beyond sin, beyond death.

I'm confused... How did she face the First if she jumped instead of Buffy?
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [16 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Finishing the Task/Home" from FairyQilan
Review:
Nice ending.
Review By [FairyQilan] • Date [28 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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