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Review of chapter "Coming Home" from starwolf
Review:
you have some great stuff here, but give me a break you have been shitting on Buffy from chapter one almost. and face it Xander has back stabbed Buffy many times also. its not seven years, if Xander spent 2 in africa and one bumming around america its closer to ten. Rona, some good some needs the crap slapped out of her. she's been a slayer for 3 years vice Buffy's ten. for the rest there have been some really great moments here and there. like the spies told Xander, he's put out enough wine for his own winery.
Review By [starwolf] • Date [16 Mar 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from Fayari
Review:
I think you should have gotten Xander to say to Buffy what he said to Riley. It was the best line in the fic.

"Oh no. I'm sure she feels bad and is really sorry. Just like I'm sure she was honestly sorry for when she dry humped me on the dance floor for the sole reason to make Angel jealous. I'm sure she was sorry for running away without ever letting us know if she was dead or alive. I'm sure she was sorry for saying we would just get in the way when dealing with Adam right before she got her ass kicked and only beat him by performing the joining spell with us. And I'm sure she was sorry for saying Spike was the only one watching her back the day after I got my eye gouged out following her plan. I'm sure she's sorry for each and every instance. I just don't think that'll ever stop her from acting the same damn way, she's always acted. I don't trust her to change that now matter how much she says she will."

Would have made for a much more realistic conversation between Xander and Buffy.
Review By [Fayari] • Date [5 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Brilliant addition. Loved the nod to School House Rock.

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [13 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from Fayari
Review:
BUffy got away to easily with all the shit she pulled over Xander and Gang.
Review By [Fayari] • Date [3 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from (Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
A truly excellent series - minus the Buffy bashing here...
Review By [(Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [25 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
What can I say? Cool :D
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [7 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [23 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from Wolf
Review:
I have really enjoyed this series of stories. I am not sure where then next one will take us but it will be worth it. I almost look forward to having Andrew stuck in CHicago for awhile and Buffy dating the Mountie was great.
Till the next.
Review By [Wolf] • Date [21 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from redrikki
Review:
The series is over? Noooooooo! Man, I loved this series. Either start another one or do a continuation or something. Please. Pretty please with a cherry on top? Seriously thought, it was really, really fun while doing a lot of really cool character insight and development and stuff.
Review By [redrikki] • Date [21 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from (Past Donor)AmarinRose
Review:
Home once more. This was nice. I liked Riley punking Xander and Buffy having her epiphany the best, though. :)
Review By [(Past Donor)AmarinRose] • Date [21 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from Vandrvekn
Review:
Good story as usual in this series, I liked Buffy and Frasier together, it's not a pairing I would have expected. Buffy with a disturbingly clean-cut individual is just weird. I loved some of the call-backs to earlier stories like the bit with Herbie.

Funniest line: “Hell, considering what he did, hanging's too good for him. Can you believe the nerve? That goat has been traumatized for life,”

Keep it up, looking forward to the next part.
Review By [Vandrvekn] • Date [21 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from Elleria
Review:
Love this!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [21 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Nice. Bit sappy though.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [20 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from JasonBarnett
Review:
Okay, this is a well written fic, and it's got some good points. It also has numerous bad points, ones that are very common of Xander fans, and I'd really love to have them addressed.

Okay, Buffy's big crime here seems to be she didn't live up to Xander's expectations. Why does she have to? Her job is to save the world, not be Xander's hero.

Riley pointed out that group consensus was the way they used to do things. It worked for years. So why the change?

Buffy has worked two jobs that were beneath her to support herself. Does Xander really think firing her is going to do anything?
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [20 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Coming Home" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
There are so many good things about
this chapter I wouldn't know where
to begin. I will say this, it's a damn
fine ending.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [20 May 07] • Not Rated
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