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Review of chapter "20: Epilogue" from Ansku
Review:
Lovely :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [6 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20: Epilogue" from Red
Review:
Who's child was it?
Review By [Red] • Date [22 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Red Willow, Red Sands" from (Recent Donor)kribby
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so I was watching the mummy and decided to check out the movies/mummy/willow crossover section of this site... your story is an enjoyable muddle.
Review By [(Recent Donor)kribby] • Date [25 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20: Epilogue" from purrfus
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I found the last few chapters confusing, and I was already confused when I reached the end of chapter 16. The conclusion of your story was not a climax, it feels as if there were several more chapters of material that just haven't been posted. I did set up a tracking on this story, so if the lost chapters are found and posted, I will come to read them.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [9 Nov 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "14" from purrfus
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Sometimes even when something is clear in your mind its difficult to translate that into the written word in all of its internal complexity. The Ardath / Joyce situation explanation is a little awkward. Basic story is enjoyable, but even after reading a few of the chapters several times some of the internal logic seems to be escaping me. Oh well, maybe it will be clearer when I read the rest.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [31 Oct 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "8" from purrfus
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Have to stop for now. Joyce/Buffy/Dawn related to AB too? Ok where did the blonde in this group come from - even if they are using the bottle for a lighter shade? Back to read the rest later.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [27 Oct 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Red Willow, Red Sands" from purrfus
Review:
Just found this story. I laughed when Alex mentioned wondering about the blonde hair. So, did Sheila marry into a Jewish family and convert or was Evy's mom an Egyptian Jew?
Review By [purrfus] • Date [27 Oct 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "20: Epilogue" from Wise
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It begins with great promise, but descends into the muck of the Willow-Sue well before the ending has arrived.

Beyond that, there are problems with OOCness. Willow is the most consistently OOC, followed immediately by Buffy.

(spoiler warning for anyone reading this review who has not yet read the story)

One thing I did find amusing, however, was the idea of a Jewish reincarnation/daughter/whatever of Isis. ;)
Review By [Wise] • Date [31 Oct 04] • Rating [5 out of 10]
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