I was speachless because i was in shock...to the other reviewer i was at a loss as well.... I hope this is not REALLY the end....that you just teased us...because its such a great starter chapter...shock the mess out of us and then explain the reason....pretty please?
Comments from author:
Oh, well in that case, thank you. Really, this was just something to do for a one-shot. I only have like 9 days left of school so I had time to go through my fanfiction account and post some of the storys written there, here. It was written so long ago...anyway, I'm not entirly sure what I'll do with this story yet, but if I DO do anything with The Key No More, then it won't happen until later in the month of July because currently I am already working on silent death.....thank you, i am glad that you like the story.
Review of chapter "Into the Lake!" from PhoenixRae
Review:
OK...for the life of me I can't seem to comprehend why Dawn would even be dragged to the lake during the Second Task of the Triwizard contest only to end up dying. So confusing. >.<
IMO, you need to explain that a bit more, unless I'm the only one who didn't understand the reason why she ended up in the lake after she cut herself.
Review By [PhoenixRae] • Date [24 May 07] • Not Rated