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Review of chapter "Wolves in the Wood" from mayoi
Review:
i like it!!!
don't let me hanging like this, please???
Review By [mayoi] • Date [8 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wolves in the Wood" from forlornfeline
Review:
I really like that. Poor Oz!
Review By [forlornfeline] • Date [7 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wolves in the Wood" from slytherinwithwings
Review:
Please, may I have some more???
Review By [slytherinwithwings] • Date [3 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wolves in the Wood" from slytherinwithwings
Review:
*makes big puppy eyes* can I have some more?
Review By [slytherinwithwings] • Date [6 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wolves in the Wood" from (Past Donor)angelaask
Review:
Interesting beginning. It was a little dificult to follow at first. It could use a little more transition from when Logan left the mansion to his jog in the park. But it did smoothed out in the end. I would definitely like to read more of this story.
Comments from author:
Thanks for that. Originally I had this chapter in a series of flashbacks, but that didn't work either. I'll re-work it after I get another chapter or two cranked out. (If I stop and edit too much now, I'll never move on!)
Review By [(Past Donor)angelaask] • Date [24 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wolves in the Wood" from CousinMary
Review:
Good beginning :)
Review By [CousinMary] • Date [24 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wolves in the Wood" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Very interesting. Will there be a pairing in this?
Comments from author:
Hadn't thought that far ahead yet ...
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [23 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wolves in the Wood" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Mmm. Interesting bit of character POV. But is it night or day? And howcome we only learn it is frigid cold out in comparision to ?? So the exposition needs some work to hook me into the time and the place, but the storytelling is pretty good.
Comments from author:
This was one of those spur of the moment "I need to get this down on paper right now!" chapters. Editing will come later. Thanks for the tips.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 May 07] • Not Rated
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