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Review of chapter "Three: Jack to Elizabeth" from Letomo
This - is an exquisite set of stories. Each one was perfectly in character, felt right, was a good read, and I enjoyed it immensely, more than I expected to. Thank you for sharing it!
Review By [Letomo] • Date [11 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three: Jack to Elizabeth" from (Past Donor)Joyful
Dude. This story rocks.
Review By [(Past Donor)Joyful] • Date [12 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One: Elizabeth to Will" from TaleWeaver
*sigh* thank goodness you wrote this. I'm a huge Elizabeth/Will shipper, but it's taken a couple of days for me to realize just how sucky an ending this was for them - I was just too relieved that I wasn't left cold like X3 or picking out edits like Spidey3. To be honest, even as I was watching that tag, one of the people I was with said 'gee, she looks young', and I immediately though 'Calypso' - makes sense that she'd take pity on the woman who did what she couldn't.
Also? Loved that Anamaria was back - sorta. One of the two things that really bothered me about AWE was that we never found out what happened to her (the other was that we never found out the backstory for Jack and Beckett).
This basically tied up nearly all my few problems with the series - also, the character voices were just right. Of course Elizabeth would find a way to be independent, and succeed. Of course Will would work out a way to send her letters, and Jack's part was just... so Jack, helping out his friends and self-serving at the same time. (the term 'multi-tasker' is something of an understatement)
One of my few 10's.
Any updates on Book's Legacy?
Review By [TaleWeaver] • Date [28 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three: Jack to Elizabeth" from Nosi
I totally agree with you about the ending - it pretty much devastated me too. Thank heavens for fanfiction and writers like you who can help us deal with it.
I like the idea of Jack finding the fountain of youth and sharing with Elizabeth too. That was the idea I was clinging to to try to get over the whole thing. Good work and thanks again.
Review By [Nosi] • Date [27 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three: Jack to Elizabeth" from jupitersdaughter
You are a fic goddess. That goes so nicely around the little turd of an ending they left us with. Wonderful!
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [27 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three: Jack to Elizabeth" from Bluedove
Those were comforting.
Review By [Bluedove] • Date [27 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three: Jack to Elizabeth" from celebrindal
I love you. That is all. :)
Review By [celebrindal] • Date [27 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One: Elizabeth to Will" from (Moderator)KaylaShay

My thoughts after watching were that Elizabeth and Will should have pierced the heart together... If that would have worked... Or even Will, Elizabeth and Jack pierce it together...
Comments from author:
Well, they *did*, sort of. Jack had his hand clasped over Will's on the broken sword, to make sure he pierced the heart-- Will was already nearly dead, and presumably didn't have the strength left to grip the pommel on his own.

Unfortunately, it appeared that only one heart could be cut out and put into the chest, and whomever that would be would be the Captain. Will needed the job, lest he die; and Jack wouldn't join him aboard, because then he wouldn't be Captain Sparrow.

Personally, I thought Bootstrap should have lunged and stabbed the heart before Davy Jones got the bee in his bonnet to run Will through; there were several seconds there where nobody was dying and somebody could have acted. Then there still would have been that bit of tragedy (Will not being able to save his dad after all) but the other three could have gone off into the sunset together with Jack's bit of map and the *Pearl*. Instead, *nobody* ended up entirely happy.
Review By [(Moderator)KaylaShay] • Date [26 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three: Jack to Elizabeth" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
I was hopeing that Jack would find the fountain and take Elizabeth to it. Glad he got the Pearl back. Sounds rather ominous that she is cheating on Will with Jack. but then I got the feeling of history repeating it's self. I hope Will doesn't turn into a squid face. I think he has a pretty good head on his shoulders I wouldn't mind at all if you wrote a short story about what happens when she and Jack go to find the fountain of youth.
Comments from author:
She isn't cheating! If you read the next line after Jack's obnoxious flirting, you'll see she slapped him a good one for the remark. They're old friends by now, so it's probably a running joke at this pont. Not to mention that Elizabeth *told* Will Jack was visiting her, and Will was teasing Jack, too, so everyone's aware that everyone's been visiting each other, even *if* something more was going on. It's been more than eleven years since they all first met.

I am thinking about writing more in this verse, a proper story instead of these one-POV conversation pieces, but I had to get my first reaction out immediately.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [26 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three: Jack to Elizabeth" from (Past Donor)halfbloodpuffskin
THANK YOU! I saw this last night at 12 or so, and I've been thinking about it constantly since then. After it ended, I'm fairly sure I annoyed everyone within hearing with my prattling on about how Elizabeth goes off with Jack and get's all "Aqua de Vida"' just makes sense! So THANK you for putting my wish into words!

All three were great, especially Jack's (for reasons above) anxiously awaiting ANYTHING else you might be writing!

oh, and congrats on being the first PotC 3 fanfic'er on tth! I've been watching all day!
Review By [(Past Donor)halfbloodpuffskin] • Date [25 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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