This was a good story. I liked how you were melding the two canons, and I am sorry that the muse left.

Any chance we'll see the revamp this year?

Pretty good story. I'm not a fan of the orginal Japanese Kamen Rider series, but I gave you a ten for making Willow a badass hero.

This one needs a revamp bad; I started before the KR series was done and completely fucked up a lot of the characterization because of it.

Shiny! I'd never even heard of this show before I stumbled across your fic. Funny as all hell and very different from the normal YAHF. Keep up the good work!

Danke.

I have only one thing to say: LET THE BATTLE COMMENCE!

Soon. :)

Killing Buffy? *BIG GULP!* That is an option I would rather AVOID if possible. Granting the wish? Again avoid! There has to be a third option!

Eh, Buffy's overrated. ^_^

UH OH! WISH EPISODE! Only this time Buffy made the wish! Kendra is kaupts, and everyone is safe for the moment! I think that Buffy is going to REGRET what she did!

Well, it's not just Buffy. We'll be seeing other Imagin in the future.

Sounds like a possible threesome here! Willow, Cordy AND Harmony! At least, since Buffy blew it, someone was there to pick up the pieces. And Willow in leather pants? Sounds like a little bit of Vamp Willow showing up there!

Nah, there's just a reason Faith wears 'em. ;)

And there is a triad planned later in the story, but not for those three.

Sounds like Willow just gave Cordy a WAKE UP CALL! And a badly needed one at that! Now, lets see how things go, and if these two end up as a couple, instead of Willow and Tara.

Yes. Yes they will. ^_^

Sounds like Willow has gotten to Cordy! Boy is Queen C going to find her life turned around BIG TIME!

We are the Willow. You will be assimilated. Resistance is futile.

Well, the choice has been made, and Xander is NOT liking it! But, it had to be done, for Willow's safety. And, with her going after Queen C, its going to be VERY interesting to see if she succeeds in seducing the Sunnydale Prom Queen!

Well, it was the latest move in a long line of bad moves from him. Oh well. That's the power of free will.

Um. Weren't they on the train outside of time? When did they end up back in the library, and why would they choose the present instead of earlier to try and prevent Buffy's moment of weakness?

*doublefacepalms* Yet again, I forget that not everyone watches Den-O.

A.) The DenLiner works with regular doors, like we saw with Giles's office. So it provides them instantaneous connection to anywhere and everywhere, because they can exit time via one door into the DenLiner, then reenter the real world somewhere else. And it CAN pause time during the period in which the door is open, which they've used to comedic effect to make Hana and Ryoutarou swap places when the 'real world' starts moving again.

B.) That would cause the Owner to deny them passage. Changing the past is prohibited unless it's an involuntary change (them dodging an attack which damages a building, which would still be damaged in the present) or something that cannot affect the time between that past and now (as we'll see later in the story). Going back to right before Buffy became a host and undoing it would cause a time paradox, because then they'd never go back in time to prevent Buffy from becoming a host.

Actually, just for you... I'll address both of those in an upcoming chapter. Try to lay out more of the mythos for you. I was going to do a file of "Everything You Need To Know About Den-O", but I should fit pertinent info like that into the story. I just didn't want to do giant chapters of exposition, but if I do a little here or there... it should be easier to stomach.

well, this was good. Gotta love insecure cordelia :-)

Cordy has more issues than a comic book store. ^_^

Well, despite the logistics, you seem to be doing just fine with the rating system on this site. Thanks for sharing.

Yeah, this site wasn't the problem. The other site was what kept me from writing even the two girls kissing "on screen", so to speak, and so now that I'm no longer going to be posting there, I've got a LOT of notation in my Word documents as to where stuff was removed and I can put it back in. It ranges from a line here or there to an entire chapter, in one case.

Damn, getting banned is always annoying :/
Ah well, can't say i am not happy to see more Willow/Cordelia goodness :-)
And maybe some Hana Thrown in?

Well, this is all changes to stuff in #13 and before. So no new Hana content really, because #13 was written post-ban and will only change if I change something major enough in an early chapter that the results trickle down.