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Review of chapter "Be Careful What You Wish For" from SlykeDB
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strangely I can only think what a jip... never even got to meet superman- died before he even landed. Unless I suppose you want to argue that to meet someone is to be at best 100 feet away and as a charred skeleton...
Review By [SlykeDB] • Date [17 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Be Careful What You Wish For" from Vassago
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There are so many things wrong with this story...

Halfrek wouldn't kill the abused children. At least, I can't see her getting them killed on purpose. She's trying to serve Vengeance against the parents (and other abusers) whom abuse the children, not get vengeance against the abused children. :P I'm sure she's killed her number of children, and adults, but I doubt she ever really meant to have the abused children themselves get killed. Horribly maimed psychologically? Sure, but not killed.

I could definitely see how things could go wrong, too. Meteor radiation killing them instead, meteor freaks completely destroying their lives (and Smallville's life) before Kal-El comes into his power(s), many things like that. What I don't see happening as a result of that wish was what was described here, mainly them being killed immediately after the wish is made.

It's your story though, and I liked the premise, and how it started, just not the end.
Review By [Vassago] • Date [18 Nov 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Be Careful What You Wish For" from Kumoatsu
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Okay I understand your need for dark but you forgot something. There are no thrusters in supes space craft.
Review By [Kumoatsu] • Date [26 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Be Careful What You Wish For" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
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Ok that was just wrong of you. waaaah!!!
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [6 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Be Careful What You Wish For" from Difdi
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Given how Halfrek grants wishes against those who have abused children, is she now vulnerable to having to grant a wish against herself?
Review By [Difdi] • Date [19 May 08] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Be Careful What You Wish For" from Duskie
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...all wishes do turn on their maker but they are also granted right? So, when does Xander get to meet superman? Sequel?!
Review By [Duskie] • Date [17 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Be Careful What You Wish For" from (Past Donor)James
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Well, that's not quite what I had in mind, but it was well written.

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [29 May 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Be Careful What You Wish For" from Dragonelf
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I hope you get inspired to write a sequel.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [28 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Be Careful What You Wish For" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
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Irony, heh.

Hmm, I'm not sure it counts as an Amalgam if they die that quickly.

Dude! Wishing that you had Superman's parents, without wishing *you* were Superman... That's just asking for trouble :D
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [27 May 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Be Careful What You Wish For" from Mcspender
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Whooaa!!!.
Dark of the Darkest Matte Black... Dark=D!.

Damn vengeance demons, they're always messing up things =P.

See ya!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [26 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Be Careful What You Wish For" from CPTSkip
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Oh yes, this is dark! Dark, dark and more darkness. But ironical. But I really don't know where you could go with it, so is this the end?
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [26 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Be Careful What You Wish For" from michaelangelo
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Doh! *facepalm*, seems more Ironic than dark. Not to mention Xander never got a chance to meet Superman. The wish was defective! I want my money back! heh
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [26 May 07] • Not Rated
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