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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Blackett
Review:
funny!
Review By [Blackett] • Date [30 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from serenityselena
Review:
omg ....
that was so great ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [24 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from alexceasar
Review:
“Good. Glad to hear it,” Jack clapped his hands together, so proud of himself. “Now, what’s this Teal’c told me about you doing the Goombini Macarena?”
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That is so Jack. Very good job here. I loved your Daniel voice.
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Amai
Review:
It's very sweet.

I was reading about the vegetable not peeps, and drooling on my keyboard. The real ones have geleton, which I don't eat, so I would love to have the toast able treats in your story.

I like the ending. How it ties it off and leaves it open at the same time.

I just wish I lived in a world where Dawn smuggled some back to earth.

:)
Review By [Amai] • Date [6 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BrendanM
Review:
Cute!
Review By [BrendanM] • Date [1 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Cas
Review:
LOL, very cute. Loved the "forced fun" foisted on Daniel. That boy's way too serious and the Summers girls are just what he needs to loosen him up :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Cas] • Date [21 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SassyFrass
Review:
Very fun. I loved the part about the 'Goombinis' being a crime family--totally something the Summerses would think. I also loved the little addition of Dawn loving the Peeps veggies, and trying to smuggle them back in her shirt. . . not her pack or anything, her shirt. Very enjoyable, and just all-around great.
Review By [SassyFrass] • Date [21 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
I liked the fact that you mentioned Sha're in an almost offhanded very believable way. Daniel has had his heart shattered and you shared this bit of angst without being over dramatic. I also enjoyed the little snippet that Daniel figured out Buffy was intelligent enough to know how to pronounce things but she mangled them just to be annoying most times.

And even though I like the Buffy/Daniel pairing I very much enjoyed the fact that in your story's verse they more than likely wouldn't end up together because they just didn't mesh right but they could flirt harmlessly. (I hoped that made sense)

This was refreshing and sweet. Thank you for sharing.
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [4 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)AerynSpeedleCaine
Review:
Very cute. Just a one up, huh? Too bad. Liked it plenty though.
Review By [(Past Donor)AerynSpeedleCaine] • Date [27 May 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Very sweet!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [27 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
That was very sweet I love it. In fact I am craving more. I would love to read a sequel with more Buffy Daniel goodness. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [27 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
I think that I saw this up a few weeks ago?

I really enjoyed it especially the part where Daniel thinks his heart is to broken. You left it unsaid that Buffy's heart is just as broken. I liked how he had figured out that Buffy was mispronouncing the Goold on purpose. And that he was taking notes on the way Buffy and Dawn talked!

Very nice story with all the best parts of Daniel and Buffy thrown in.
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [27 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [27 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AngelaM
Review:
how sweet. I know it's probably a one shot, but I can't help but home in future there will be more.
Review By [AngelaM] • Date [27 May 07] • Not Rated
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