“Good. Glad to hear it,” Jack clapped his hands together, so proud of himself. “Now, what’s this Teal’c told me about you doing the Goombini Macarena?” ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That is so Jack. Very good job here. I loved your Daniel voice.
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Not Rated
I was reading about the vegetable not peeps, and drooling on my keyboard. The real ones have geleton, which I don't eat, so I would love to have the toast able treats in your story.
I like the ending. How it ties it off and leaves it open at the same time.
I just wish I lived in a world where Dawn smuggled some back to earth.
Very fun. I loved the part about the 'Goombinis' being a crime family--totally something the Summerses would think. I also loved the little addition of Dawn loving the Peeps veggies, and trying to smuggle them back in her shirt. . . not her pack or anything, her shirt. Very enjoyable, and just all-around great.
Review By [SassyFrass] • Date [21 Oct 07] • Not Rated
I liked the fact that you mentioned Sha're in an almost offhanded very believable way. Daniel has had his heart shattered and you shared this bit of angst without being over dramatic. I also enjoyed the little snippet that Daniel figured out Buffy was intelligent enough to know how to pronounce things but she mangled them just to be annoying most times.
And even though I like the Buffy/Daniel pairing I very much enjoyed the fact that in your story's verse they more than likely wouldn't end up together because they just didn't mesh right but they could flirt harmlessly. (I hoped that made sense)
This was refreshing and sweet. Thank you for sharing.
I really enjoyed it especially the part where Daniel thinks his heart is to broken. You left it unsaid that Buffy's heart is just as broken. I liked how he had figured out that Buffy was mispronouncing the Goold on purpose. And that he was taking notes on the way Buffy and Dawn talked!
Very nice story with all the best parts of Daniel and Buffy thrown in.
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