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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from arkeus
Review:
Hey. Cute :-)
this is quite good indeed !
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [21 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MBB
Review:
Nice story. I read your comments-on-replies and agree with your view of content-Buffy, and think you succeeded well in expressing that with this fic.
It has that mood of Buffy bonding with Kendra after 'what's my line'.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I appreciate it. I don't know exactly what kind of mood I was going for when I wrote this. Heck, I wasn't even planning on writing this kind of story. Buffy was in Boston for an entirely different reason, the slayer she was looking for. I had planned on writing about any or all difficulties she had in finder her. But for some reason, I had the idea of a youngish pregnant girl asking Buffy for some cash and Buffy helping her. Thus my original story went out the window. Although I'll probably get back to it. Again, thanks for reviewing and for agreeing with me. (One less person I have to be annoyed with.) I'm very glad you enjoyed my story.
Review By [MBB] • Date [31 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonelf
Review:
A nice sweet story with a happy ending.

:: Does the wave ::

Edit: The second one.
Comments from author:
The wave? As in, "You are waving to me" or as in, "Doing the wave in a crowd of people to simulate the wave of an ocean?" I'm confused. It's all right though. You enjoyed the story, for which I am grateful, feel free to do whatever you want. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.

Edit: Awesome!
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [30 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)kcl
Review:
What a nice, pleasant little piece of fluff (and I mean that in a very good way). It was long enough to get past the "drabble" feeling, yet short enough for a satisfying read. Thanks!
Comments from author:
Your welcome. I'm glad you liked it. Though I would rather you used some way to describe my story other than "fluff". It's vaguely emasculating. I'm kidding. Kinda. Thanks again for taking the time to read my story. I really appreciate the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)kcl] • Date [28 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SamJames
Review:
A nice sweet story. I like how you tied this to Buffy's own experiences being homeless. One minor nit, the Red Line goes to Harvard, not green. And I remember the Garage well; there was a cheap pizza place and place that sold rolled sandwitches there that were high on the list of places to go when we got tired of dining hall food.
Comments from author:
As you're the second person to have pointed out my error to me, I've gone back and HOPEFULLY corrected them. I included the Garage in my story because of some fond memories there. We were eating there when one of my friends read a comic book I bought that had a brutal cliff hanger. He was dissatisfied with the ending and ripped the book in half. Fortunately the store I bought it at hadn't closed yet so he went and replaced it. Fortunately for him anyway.
Review By [SamJames] • Date [28 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)oldshoe
Review:
A nice little slice of Buffy's life story. Just one thing - you got the Boston subway map mixed up. The red line goes to Harvard Square. To get from Copley to Harvard get on the green line and change at Park Street. The red line is real subway cars. The green line is a sort of trolly car that runs underground in the central city and above ground elsewhere.
Comments from author:
Meh. I haven't used the subway in twelve years. I'm really lucky I remembered anything. All of Buffy's frustration at the multi-colored subways stemmed from my own confusion as a kid. Anyway, I'm sure that you're correct and I'm wrong. Thank you for leaving me this review. I appreciate you taking the time to read my story.

P.S. I believe I fixed all the incorrect info on the subways. Thanks for pointing it out to me.
Review By [(Past Donor)oldshoe] • Date [28 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from supernaturalfanatic
Review:
Aww... I was hoping for a happy ending.. I didn't want Mary to die or get bitten or something. Great job!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you approve. I briefly toyed with the idea of turning Mary into a vampire, but I felt that it was too, cliche is probably not the right word. Tacky maybe? Whatever. It was a bad idea. Also, being turned into a demon would probably be bad for babies. Not a place I wanted to go to just yet. Thanks for reading!
Review By [supernaturalfanatic] • Date [28 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Tripper
Review:
What a great story and a nice glimpse into Buffy's life. It's nice to see Buffy being Buffy in a non slayer way. Thanks for sharing it.
Comments from author:
You're welcome. I've read a lot of stories that show Buffy being a badass slayer. Hell, and some stories where she's not. There have been stories where she's messed up in some psychological manner, (Which is absolutely true. Our favorite slayer is fraking damaged.) but I haven't read many stories where she's a relatively content person. There's a good reason for that. It would be boring. However, if you make other people have more problems than her, you get to have relatively normal Buffy. Plus she gets to solve their issues while completely ignoring any of her own. Completely in character! Thanks for reading and for your kind words!
Review By [Tripper] • Date [28 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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