Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
LooneyboyoReview:
True love means making sure you're loved one never notices the weight gain.
I liked this one. And indeed, all your stories (except for the depressing ones, cos they're, well, depressing).
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comment.
Warning: Sorry i can feel a depressing story coming on...but that won't be for a month of two!
all the best,
DaveT
Review By [
Looneyboyo] • Date [7 Mar 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
heathenseyesReview:
That was really funny; thank you for sharing it.
:)
Comments from author:
Thank-you...Once I saw that picture it just had to be done!
All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [
heathenseyes] • Date [25 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
KiwikatipoReview:
Yes I can see them as a one true pairing through your eyes. I loved the slimfast ad too.
Comments from author:
Made me laugh.
Dave.
Review By [
Kiwikatipo] • Date [30 May 07] • Not Rated