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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)TraceyC
Review:
A good beginning so far - keep it coming. Good job keeping Willow and Snape in character, too.
Review By [(Past Donor)TraceyC] • Date [8 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from pezgirl
Review:
great start! (:
Review By [pezgirl] • Date [31 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mithrilandtj
Review:
I like it.
A new twist on an old story.
WIllow as Harry's half sister thru Lily is a Refreshing change.
Do more.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [30 May 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Eve
Review:
Sooo many places you could go from here. I'm intrested to see where you take it. You write it and I promise I'll come back to read it!

: )
Review By [Eve] • Date [30 May 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
Intriguing beginning.

The first part goes especially well with the artwork in Child.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [30 May 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I'm enjoying your twist on the theme. Make it a little more clear what summer this is for Harry, and how old he is, please. The physical description parts and the mystery of people not having statistics over their heads about how old they are were good and valid. 19 year old Willow doesn't look that different from 17 year old Willow or 27 year old Willow. And I'm sure you will get a chorus of "Evans" from other reviewers... but just in case...I'm sure Willow had to leave a lot out (specific incidents that weren't so major) for her 7 season explanation to only take one afternon... so that nicely leaves room for Harry to still be surprised by some of her experiences and knowledge.
Thanks much for sharing this.
Comments from author:
LOL... I did spell Lily's name wrong didn't I... Geez... It will be fixed. Thanks for pointing it out. Also, Questions on how old everyone is will be delt with later. I will state here, that Harry is going to be turning 16, since this is the summer before his 7th year. Which is why he wouldn't have to go back to the Dursley's after school. Oliver's presence at Hogwarts will also be explained. Thank you so much for your input! Here's a cookie!!!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 May 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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