I hope you're going to finish this some day. I'm really enjoying it.
Comments from author:
There's plots and plans and some dialogue written so it will be finished. I'm unsure as to when, but it will be done. Thank you for reviewing and reminding me that I need to complete it. :)
Review By [Krysstinia] • Date [16 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Good job. Characterizations are very good. Love the banter of the three and Dean's reaction to Slayer's coming from demons seems spot on to me. And as for Dean having stayed after she came back...I would love to see a fic where that happened. More please.
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [1 Sep 08] • Not Rated
While the fic on the whole is excellent--good dialogue, plausible previous interaction--I particularly enjoyed (Bet you thought I was about to complain. Hee.) the parts in chapter 2 where Buffy's trying to explain the demon thing she ran into, and she comes up with warm, showery, and ugly hatted. That was good, but following it with Sam fishing for vision advice, and Buffy complaining about "their crypto-color glory" and trying to figure out exactly what to call Cordelia before snapping back to real life and promising to try to help? That was splendid.
Wow. I'm speechless. The dialog, the characters... You've got Dean down pat. I'm so jealous of the way you write him! The sexual tension you've created between Buffy and Dean is absolutely combustible.
More! I'm begging!
Review By [anyanka] • Date [11 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
So much greatness that after reading this chapter I felt compelled to go back and reread the first chapter before giving this one another run-through. As always, I love what you do with a post-BtVS Buffy. You've given us a mature, adult Buffy who has seen and done awful things, and yet still maintains that spark that makes her the character that we all love and adore. She has depth, and that, if nothing else, makes this worth reading.
Then, of course, there's the fact that you've added Dean and Sam, and really, can anything go wrong with the addition of those two?
So well done, as always - and looking forward to the promised third part of this little gem!
Review By [Lisette] • Date [10 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Ok, so you know I love this story. :D But now that I've actually seen that episode, this makes me giggle even more.
WWBD.... *snort* *giggle* *guffaw*
:D
Comments from author:
I adore the funny episodes of SPN because the boys get to act like real brothers and I'm still pondering using Nair in this one-shot. Glad you liked it and *guffawed*.
Review By [polgara] • Date [1 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]