I am of course, not reading this, and this another one of those hallucinogenic reviews you seem to keep getting.
I love Sunnydale Cordelia - so much more fun than Los Angeles Cordelia and you got her attitude for the time perfect. However, from the title I was expecting at least one faked orgasm.
Comments from author:
You know, I've been meaning to talk to you about how the site lets these hallucinogenic reviews be posted on my Supernatural stuff... I figured there were blocks in place for them. ;-)
Glad you loved my Cordy. This was my first time writing her outside of a small cameo in my Quantum Leap fic, so I worried about putting either too much snark, or not enough.
Darn! I knew I forgot something on my check list for this story. Next time there will be an orgasm... or a fake one at least. :-)
Review By [jrabbit] • Date [12 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Good story. I don't watch Supernatural, but I really liked the Cordy-in-Mexico part, and how well it was worked-out :-)
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it even without the Supernatural watching. I was trying to think of way that Cordy could have met them before she went to LA and finally remembered that she spent a summer in Mexico and then looked up the script of the episode where Willow talked to her and the rest is history.
I'm glad you didn't wait for me to proofread this because it was a very happy surprise when I got to work this morning!
This was just wonderful. You did a fabulous job with Cordelia's voice. The whole flow of the piece was well put together. I liked the jumps between the present and the past. And I really enjoyed the Cordelia/Dean interactions throughout.
The manipulation that you did for this story just kicks ass. I loved the pictures of Cordelia and Dean. The colors in the background were great. And the Mexican flag was blended in nicely to the rest of the picture.
Any chance we can get some more snippets into this verse? Pretty please.... I'll beg.
*hugs*
Comments from author:
Thanks for the beta! I finished last night and couldn't wait to post so Sierra did a beta read for me.
I thought I had fixed all the punch/kick references, but I guess I missed them. Originally she punched him in the face then Ava convinced me ball kicking was better. All fixed now though.
It was well worth the wait. I loved the part where the bugs thought she was the slayer and the part where she thought Sam and Dean could be vampires because of the way they dressed.
Comments from author:
I almost forgot about the beach vampire thoughts. Makes me want to revisit that Baywatch thing I did. I guess I could use Baywatch Nights instead.
So freakin' cute and not a dead person in sight...are you feeling alright? I liked Cordy's conflicting emotions about Dean when she was younger and you did a fabulous job voicing her in both parts. Wonderful jobs with the snotty quick tongued teenager and the mellow but still quick tongued adult. They were just different enough that the reader (or this reader at least) saw a slight shift in personality.
Wonderful job and Team:Hellfire so rocks!
Comments from author:
I vow to kill more people soon! You have my word on that. ;-)
I'm glad you liked how Cordelia came out cause I was nevous writing her since I never had before. And her type of person is almost alien to me since I grew up on a farm as a tomboy...
And yes Team:Hellfire ROX!
Review By [Ava] • Date [31 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
You even used the "Don't look at me like that, I'm not the one that touched it" prompt! Yay! I totally believe Cordy's action of kicking Dean was justified. Way to go! And this totally means one point for Hellfire!
Comments from author:
Someone caught on to how long I've been working on this fic. I started it back as a make up fic-a-thon and then was going to use it for that challenge at the same time. One thing led to another and I never finished it. Then I saw a Cordy/Dean prompt on the list and had to finish it. I think I wrote almost 2000 more words in addition to what I already had done.