Nice story. More please!

Good story. Sorry it never ended.

It would be a 10 out of 10, but it's not complete! If you ever get around to writing/posting more, that would be awesome!

Nice crossover! I hope that you will continue with this fic!
I realy like it ^-^

Pretty good story here! Unfortunately, looks like Gemmi was unable to continue writing it. I very much would have liked to see how the different relationships played out!!!

Damn good. Please please please update soon.

Just re-reading this story and wanted to send you a note of encouragement that readers are still anxiously awaiting more. :)

this is very enjoyable. just letting you know.

Are you going to up date?

'cause this is a very cool story & i want to see where you take it.

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toni

Just discovered this and I LOVE it! I normally only read Buffy-centric stories, but you had me intrigued. I would really love to see where you take this. Any chance for an update? :)

Was re-reading in the hope an update might appear. I hope real life calms down & allows you to continue this story soon. I really want the backtrack to see what happened between chapter 22 & 23. I'm thoroughly enjoying the emphasis on Xander & Dawn, with Rona & the Eppes' brothers on the side.

I am a bit confused though. Suddenly in chapter 23, Dawn is thinking about Xander crushing on Don but earlier chapters more clearly hinted that Xander was crushing on Charlie, and Charlie on him. I don't remember any hint of Don being interested in Xander that way, more that he wanted to figure out the mystery of what Xander does & Dawn's history.

It''s a cool story so far and I like where it's going, but I'm a bit confused by the last chapter...
Haw did they get to the bar? And what's with the Dawn calming the situation? What is the situation? I'm sorry if I sound a little over-critical, but I really am confused.
Please update soon, maybe it'll help clear-up some of the confusion.

Hehe flashing gay guys always gets interesting results! Keep going please!

i just found this and love it. Hope to see more soon.

I like the story, but I think that maybe I missed something. When did Xander explain things? It jumped straight from chapter 22: Don wants to know why Xander is at the crime scene...then to chapter 23: Don commenting on something Dawn said and referring to the slayer. When was the big reveal scene? Where did Dawn come from? She wasn't there at first (Xander, Rona, and Charlie arrived). Don is a law officer and Charlie is a numbers guy. Shouldn't there have been an element of ...prove it?