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Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from Glumski
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Good story so far, even though this feels like it's only the introduction. The foreshadowing (or backshadowing?) with that China thing and the prophecy are very well done and I like what you made out of the characters. I'm not too sure about the slash thing; I haven't watched many episodes of Numb3rs but Charlie doesn't exactly strike me as somebody gay so it feels a little forced. Apart from that... well, it's a sad thing this story's incomplete but I enjoyed what is already written.
Review By [Glumski] • Date [15 May 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from Vickzie
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Interesting story so far. Hope we find out the wording of the prophecy soon. Please update some more soon.
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [21 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from NPetrenko
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Nice story. More please!
Review By [NPetrenko] • Date [27 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from fightforsomething
Review:
Good story. Sorry it never ended.
Review By [fightforsomething] • Date [1 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from LadySybyl
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It would be a 10 out of 10, but it's not complete! If you ever get around to writing/posting more, that would be awesome!
Review By [LadySybyl] • Date [25 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from greysh
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Nice crossover! I hope that you will continue with this fic!
I realy like it ^-^
Review By [greysh] • Date [4 Jan 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from BrownFinderth
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Pretty good story here! Unfortunately, looks like Gemmi was unable to continue writing it. I very much would have liked to see how the different relationships played out!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [30 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from leelaa
Review:
Damn good. Please please please update soon.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [19 Dec 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of story "The Trouble That Tomorrow Brings" from spk
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Just re-reading this story and wanted to send you a note of encouragement that readers are still anxiously awaiting more. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [18 Jun 09] • Rating [8 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "The Trouble That Tomorrow Brings" from spacey
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this is very enjoyable. just letting you know.
Review By [spacey] • Date [21 May 09] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "The Trouble That Tomorrow Brings" from tonisimone
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Are you going to up date?

'cause this is a very cool story & i want to see where you take it.

:D


toni
Review By [tonisimone] • Date [29 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "The Trouble That Tomorrow Brings" from spk
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Just discovered this and I LOVE it! I normally only read Buffy-centric stories, but you had me intrigued. I would really love to see where you take this. Any chance for an update? :)
Review By [spk] • Date [12 Dec 08] • Rating [9 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "The Trouble That Tomorrow Brings" from kaleecat
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Was re-reading in the hope an update might appear. I hope real life calms down & allows you to continue this story soon. I really want the backtrack to see what happened between chapter 22 & 23. I'm thoroughly enjoying the emphasis on Xander & Dawn, with Rona & the Eppes' brothers on the side.

I am a bit confused though. Suddenly in chapter 23, Dawn is thinking about Xander crushing on Don but earlier chapters more clearly hinted that Xander was crushing on Charlie, and Charlie on him. I don't remember any hint of Don being interested in Xander that way, more that he wanted to figure out the mystery of what Xander does & Dawn's history.
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [5 Aug 08] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "The Trouble That Tomorrow Brings" from stasa
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It''s a cool story so far and I like where it's going, but I'm a bit confused by the last chapter...
Haw did they get to the bar? And what's with the Dawn calming the situation? What is the situation? I'm sorry if I sound a little over-critical, but I really am confused.
Please update soon, maybe it'll help clear-up some of the confusion.
Review By [stasa] • Date [3 Jul 08] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "The Trouble That Tomorrow Brings" from RileyRoseRussell
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Hehe flashing gay guys always gets interesting results! Keep going please!
Review By [RileyRoseRussell] • Date [23 Jun 08] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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