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Review of chapter "Where There's Smoke..." from (Past Donor)Deanie
Review:
Interesting. I like your ideas. I know you're writing drabbles, which by definition are short, but it almost feels like you're trying to tell too much story with each one. Still, I'd like to see more.
Review By [(Past Donor)Deanie] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Where There's Smoke..." from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
Way way to short...not enough story or interaction between characters....in other words need MORE! but it is a good start
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [2 Jun 07] • Not Rated
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