Review of chapter "A Lost Love" from Dianasis
Always of fan of your writing.
- I do think the dialogue was a little stilted compared to your usual style. Sarah doesn't seem to react to the memories she's relating until after she reaches the end of each list.
+ Great in-between moment. Thanks for the story.
Review By [Dianasis
] • Date [4 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]