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A Lost Love

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Review of chapter "A Lost Love" from (Past Donor)Dianasis
Review:
Always of fan of your writing.

- I do think the dialogue was a little stilted compared to your usual style. Sarah doesn't seem to react to the memories she's relating until after she reaches the end of each list.

+ Great in-between moment. Thanks for the story.
Review By [(Past Donor)Dianasis] • Date [4 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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