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A Life Even More Less Ordinary

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Review of chapter "A Life Even More Less Ordinary" from Vassago
Review:
This is complete? That's so disappointing.
Review By [Vassago] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Life Even More Less Ordinary" from Sparta
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I thought this was good, is there going to be anymore to it? because this would make quite and intressing story to read.
Review By [Sparta] • Date [20 Jul 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Life Even More Less Ordinary" from spring
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You are evil for stopping here, brilliant but evil.
Review By [spring] • Date [14 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Life Even More Less Ordinary" from Elleria
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More please?
Review By [Elleria] • Date [10 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Life Even More Less Ordinary" from AriaDragoncrest
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I like. Write more!
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [10 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Life Even More Less Ordinary" from MusingsOfApathy
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The end after one? Seems like it was just the introduction, not the end. There is so much more story you can tell here.

Thanks for writing.

Mike (MoA)
Review By [MusingsOfApathy] • Date [3 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Life Even More Less Ordinary" from purrfus
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A very interesting opening tease.

I generally avoid Charmed crosses unless I really know and like an author's writing, because I am not a major fan of the show. Something made me stop and read this.

Xander was very well done, even though some of the details were a little off.

I would like to see more of this.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [2 Jun 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Life Even More Less Ordinary" from Infinix
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Okay points for doing something different by having him related through nonmagical relatives and the very Xander like stumbling over conversation even when only in his head. Points against for Joe instead of Anthony and ending it before it really got started.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [2 Jun 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Life Even More Less Ordinary" from CPTSkip
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This is wonderful start. Notice the word "start"? I hope there will be more because this is really a great idea and I'd love to see Xander interact with his new sisters.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [2 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Life Even More Less Ordinary" from GaboonViper
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I agree with the rest; you can't keep us hanging like this. You didn't even get to the story itself! Just a little prelude.

I demand more!
Review By [GaboonViper] • Date [2 Jun 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Life Even More Less Ordinary" from mithrilandtj
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So he comes from the non-magical side of the family.
I LIKE IT! DO MORE!!!

There IS more, right?
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [2 Jun 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Life Even More Less Ordinary" from Perdurabo
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So . . . . where's the story? I got to the end, and I thought to myself 'Hmn, that's a very short prologue." Then I see The End.

WTF?

There's no plot, there's no conflict, there's just a small bit of backstory and two lines of dialogue. This is not a story. This is not even a chapter. This, my friend, is nothing more than an opening paragraph to a chapter that never quite made it.
Review By [Perdurabo] • Date [2 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Life Even More Less Ordinary" from PrincessTai
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LMAO!
Oh this had BETTER not be finished.
At least do a Charmed Ones reaction *grins*
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [2 Jun 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Life Even More Less Ordinary" from VillageOrchid
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Oooh. The non-magical one connection. Please continue.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Jun 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Life Even More Less Ordinary" from Bill
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Good start!
Review By [Bill] • Date [1 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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