I'd rate this if I could figure out what was going on. I have NO idea who the person that knelt is, or who/what "the other one" the "slayer" was "attending to". Color me confused.
Comments from author:
WEll, even though I put this in the finished pile I will probably add a couple of more chapters, so you guys arent quite so confused on who the new character is.
Please write more as I have no idea of what the frak just happened and I'd really like to know.
Comments from author:
Heh, sorry. I just realized that no one would even know who the new character is. I will write a new chapter next week, nd it'll explain about the new character a little more.