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Coming Darkness

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Review of chapter "First Encounters" from spring
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Oh come on, you HAVE to update/finish this wonderful fic. I love this fic! More please!
Review By [spring] • Date [12 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Encounters" from iceyflame
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Hey. Your story is kick ass so far. I have a request on the pairings. I have a weird fetish for Lucius Malfoy, so I would really like to see him with Buffy. (I know I'm crazy.) Or Snape with Buffy. He is also kick ass. Anyways please update soon. Thanks!
Review By [iceyflame] • Date [5 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of story "Coming Darkness" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Willow should know by now and better than anyone, that Buffy is going to want to experience things first hand. She's an action kind of gal. Loved her run-in with Lucius in Knockturn Alley. I can't wait to read more.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [17 Jul 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Coming Darkness" from Anonymous Reviewer
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*Definitely* has potential. : ) I look forward to seeing where you take this story.

Kiri
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [16 Jul 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Coming Darkness" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Sounds like a good beginning. Can't wait to read the rest!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [3 Jul 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Coming Darkness" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Just a hint.
Chapter 1: Do Find for "Minera" and change it to Minerva. Potty fanatics are big on proper spelling, at least to be taken seriously as something other than one of those writers who churns out Mary Sues/Gary Stus about their favorite character.
Other than that, good work. Oh! Bonus points if you can shack Dawny up with Draco. Aside from being my personal preference, I think Lucius's reaction would be hilarious.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [3 Jul 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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