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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Alexis
Review:
OMG I can't believe I missed the end of this. *headdesk*

Fantastic story! I thoroughly enjoyed it from start to finish. Although your take on Manticore and the characters is a little ooc, that's the beauty of AUs. I like it. I think there's scope for further stories in this verse and I hope you'll continue one day.

Thanks for sharing!
Comments from author:
:)
That is okay. I think the last chapter came out in a week when loads of stuff was being thrown on the latest list, so it dropped the line very quickly.
I am glad you enjoyed it. And yes, I am thinking about various sequels. But at the moment it is very nebulous as I am doing my best to get the next chapter of Furyas out and maybe finish some of my other unfinished stuff like Xander Saotome or This is Us.
And the sharing was my pleasure.
Review By [Alexis] • Date [7 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Cole
Review:
I was just writing to tell you that I really enjoyed your story. I find that on a whole many stories set in the Dark Angel universe are tacky and not all that well thought out. I thought that while the characters were slightly different than they were in the show they still stayed true to the character as a whole.
I was hoping that you were going to do a second story to link onto the end of the one that you have already finished as I was really looking forward to seeing where you were going with the Sunnydale link at the end there.
I hope to read more from you soon.
Comments from author:
Hmmm, you know the funny thing. Even though it was a xover with Buffy, I thought it would be finished when I hit the end, but while I was writing the last chapter I realised that it is not the end. There is too much left to say about Sunnydale and the Scoobies and what the other transgens are doing, etc etc. However, I really want to finish some of my other stuff first, like Furyans, This is Us, Xander Saotome. All those and some other purely DA stuff. So while it is in the back of my head at the end of a very long list of things to do, don't hold your breath. :)
Glad you liked it and thank you for the feedback.
Review By [Cole] • Date [18 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Bill
Review:
Really enjoyed this. Well Done!
Review By [Bill] • Date [22 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from (Recent Donor)Kiwikatipo
Review:
The night light solution was ingenious!

I think the 'harder faster' could have been ommitted.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Kiwikatipo] • Date [21 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Bill
Review:
Really liking this! so will the base still be there when they arrive?
Comments from author:
Now that would be telling. :)
You will just have to wait and see.
Review By [Bill] • Date [18 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from Alexis
Review:
That was great, sweetie! Three gold stars and a bear hug. lol

In all seriousness, you did a really good job. Tastefully done (no tacky pron dialogue or clinical/boring terminology), but also hot. I really like the emotional component to this chapter.

*kisses*
Review By [Alexis] • Date [17 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
*fans self

Good job!
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [17 Sep 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Alexis
Review:
That was a lovely kiss. Very hot. Not purple prose at all sweetie.

Can't wait for their next encounter!
Comments from author:
Thank you. great weight off shoulders and all that. It is just so easy to get wrong, have seen it countless times.
And I really wanted to bring in that their first kiss isn't perfect, hence the bumping of noses. :)
Review By [Alexis] • Date [30 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Humenah...

You're doing this on purpose right? Dragging this out and torturing us with all of the ust. Eviiil you are.
Comments from author:
Hahahaha, no really I am not. It was a makeshift solution. Like I said, my laptop broke down and I have to retype loads of stuff. I hadn't posted here in ages, so I figured give em what you got.
And I take it the smut worked? Just judging by your reaction, you know. Good images. I think it helps to be a little in lust with Jensen when you have to write scenes like that one. Just put yourself in Max's place and.....
Next up some more sexual frustration.
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [30 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from banner
Review:
* fans self *
This slow buildup of sensuality is highly erotic. I'm going to have a shower and a nap...
Comments from author:
Thank you. That was exactly what I was going for. Sadly I have to say that this is on hiatus for the moment as my laptop is out for the count. So don't expect an update, with the resolution for all that ust, any time soon. Could be around a week before I can get everything sorted.
Review By [banner] • Date [25 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Alexis
Review:
Another excellent chapter! It makes me happy whenever I see there's an update.

The UST between them is a palpable thing. It's like the building pressure of a thunderstorm. You can feel what's coming and when they finally surrender to it... it's going to be spectacular.
Comments from author:
Imagine how Lydecker felt, he has been putting up with this for years!
Review By [Alexis] • Date [17 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Bill
Review:
Really well done! Love to see more BtVS people show up. Maybe have them settle down in Sunnydale?
Review By [Bill] • Date [17 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Wise
Review:
OK, while this is a neat story and well written, I'm not sure that it's actually Dark Angel or Buffy the Vampire Slayer. Yes, it uses ideas and concepts lifted from both shows, and yes it uses characters who appear to have the same names as some of the ones from the shows, and share some common psychology, but there is a line beyond which AU becomes original story, and this fic is just a little ways beyond said line.
Review By [Wise] • Date [17 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Alexis
Review:
*headdesk*

John Winchester of course.
Comments from author:
Well done. Yes, the great John Winchester. Sadly no boys though, would have been too confusing.
Review By [Alexis] • Date [4 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Alexis
Review:
Alec has that easygoing charm that lets him makes friends wherever he goes!

He and Max seem to be breaking out of their soldier mindset. Should be interesting to see what happens if they ever get back to Manticore. I'm thinking the longer they're a "family" on the road, the harder it will be to give that up.
Comments from author:
Hmmm, and what makes you think..... nope never mind. Didn't say anything. I was going to have this huge barfight. You know Alec lays waste to them all after getting their hard-earned cash and then thought, nah just had him all hurt and stuff, maybe I should do something different.
And you didn't notice another guest appearance? I'm shocked. ;)
Review By [Alexis] • Date [3 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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