Review of chapter "Afterwards" from Luna
*smiles* This was fun. I've been contemplating a possible Faith/Snape pairing and have taken to reading others. There are just so many similarities that I think it would be quite explosive and powerful. Thanks for sharing this.
Review By [Luna
] • Date [19 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Afterwards" from Sunrunner
I really like what you tried to do here. Faith/Snape is a couple that would be dark, intense, almost terrifying in their passion, and Faith's rage at the end is perfectly in character. However, this has a very matter-of-fact tone to it. (and this is only my opinion) I didn't feel the intensity come across in the words. Even the end could have been a much more shocking event had it not been in an every day tone. Faith doesn't think. She feels and she reacts. And even then her reactions aren't well thought out. This lacked the "Want. Take. Have." that is Faith (even redeemed!Faith), but it is also something that has limitless possibilities to be expanded into something great, and I think this would be a wonderful read if you chose to come back and work on it some more.
Review By [Sunrunner
] • Date [4 Jun 08] • Not Rated