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Review of chapter "Mission" from WhiteWolf
Review:
Ehh, if Palpatine isn't going to be the bad guy, who is? We NEED a bad guy. Otherwise there is no story.
Comments from author:
Who said palpatine isn't going to be the bad guy?
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [12 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mission" from Iriai
Review:
Wow. This is fairly original. Well, not the going to another universe or being reborn kinda thing, but being Palpatine's sister, that's new. Usually it's being Anakin's sister or whatnot. So kudos to you for the originality. Hope you update soon!
Comments from author:
Thank you.

Also, who said she'll be his sister?
Review By [Iriai] • Date [11 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mission" from VillageOrchid
Review:
An odd and interesting twist.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [11 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mission" from Valandar
Review:
Umm, it's St PETER, not St Patrick, who supposedly is the "greeter" for Heaven...
Review By [Valandar] • Date [11 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Funeral" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
You've got some good ideas, but... I don't know, it's missing something...

D'you have somebody you could read this through with and bounce ideas off of?


Palpatine? Sweet. Knowledge is power, so read through these sources:

http://www.starwars.com/databank/character/palpatine/?id=eu

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Palpatine

His early life is vague, to say the least, so you don't have many restrictions on the fic.

I'd say there's an 80% chance he was born on Naboo. Might want to read up on the setting too.

Dawn's 5'7", Adult/Teenage Palpatine is 5'8", so they're not too far off in height.


I hope when this fic is over, you'll be able to look back and say: 'Hey, I did a great job' :D
Comments from author:
Yeah thanks.

I'm looking for a Beta. Hopefully I'll get one.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [9 Jun 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Funeral" from Marita
Review:
Interesting. Everybody want to save Anakin but Palpative has as much right.
Really really interesting.
Review By [Marita] • Date [9 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Funeral" from CPTSkip
Review:
Whoa! Palpatine? I totally did not see that coming. I can't wait to see where you are going with this one. I hope your story gets happier, 'cause the first two chapters are real downers man! Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [9 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Funeral" from (Past Donor)halfbloodpuffskin
Review:
ooh, PALPATINE!? Good sneakiness there! Everytime I read "boy," it's always Emokin, as Cordy calls him in that great story...Cordy-somethingreallylongandcomplicated.
Review By [(Past Donor)halfbloodpuffskin] • Date [9 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
I liked, in a sad sort of way. But there must be more. Please update ASAP.
Comments from author:
Sure. I just have to think some more and write some more. The chapters may be a little short though.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [8 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)Demona
Review:
Again, please add a disclaimer.

Going forward, please make sure you read all the site's rules before posting.

Demona
TtH Mod
Comments from author:
Thank you for telling me.
Review By [(Moderator)Demona] • Date [8 Jun 07] • Not Rated
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