This was such a good beginning, I think it improved on the original, and I've loved the idea of Wonder Woman a long time before I actually read any. *This* Diana, and her family and her adventures and eventual joining of the Justice League is something I would love love love to see. Thank you for writing, and I hope you add more to this someday. Best wishes to you and yours. :)

I'm glad you liked it. I had always intended this story to cover all the way up to Diana's eventual introduction into the main story, though obviously I never quite got it done before my muse took a leave of absence. Hopefully, I'll find my way back to this as well.

I have reread this story and I hope you will get inspired to update it.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Apple Crisp::

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Freedom means the opportunity to be
what we never thought we would be.
- Daniel J. Boorstin
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To see the story of a girl
we all know unfurl
in such a way as to be new
inspired me to write this review.

Please continue the play
for you will make our day.

(sorry it's rhyming review day.)
(It was nice to see the story pay)
(now I shall stop)
(before I lose my top)

Pretty good origin for Wonder Woman. I liked the subtle change you made with the mask. I always thought that was wrong myself.

Very well done. Good characterezation of Diana and a backdrop of the Amazonian culture. I hope to see more.

Like the other story this is a masterpiece of literature in its own right. Keep up the good work (whatever it may be).

Hey man long time no hear from, let your fans know how you are doing man. I really hope your health is getting better.

mmm,.. no it is not the end. there is still the aftermath to deal with. nice ficlet, though. much more in depth than the tv shows or comic book versions. I still feel like complaining about the short legnth of your chapters, though. hoping to see new material soon. who's the cheeta? or maybe cheater... seems a good pun ;p

this is every inch the diana we've seen in the cartoons. she really is the champion of themyscira. can't wait to see how she relates with the rest of the gang. please update!

I have to say I enjoy your writing style. You did a really nice job of stream lining the tournament and giving us a peek at what makes Diana tick. I admit that my knowledge of Wonder Woman is foggy since I have not read a comic of hers in years but, from what I recall, you are doing a great job.

fabulous story. I love the way you write this could truly be a great story I'd leave it there for now (??Cliffhanger) don't tell them if Dianna reviles her sister Amazons dishonor (we who have read Wonder Woman for years know the answer) or her mothers reaction. instead why not go on to batman, Flash, or maybe ( here's a great Idea Virgil AKA Static Shock) or another new way to crossover with buffyverse spike attacks a girl but she keeps her soul instant new hero.
another chapter soon. hint hint plz plz plz pretty please

*hugs & kisses*

Another good story in this set.Would love to read more.

Awesome story, can't wait for an update! Please keep this going!

Very good story.
You do a great Justice to the Wonder Women story. Nicely done.

It wasn't until the very end that I remembered that one of WW foes was known as the Cheetah. I didn't know that she was a fellow Amazon!

James, who is enjoying this universe.