Review of chapter "History, the Future, and Everything in Between" from arkeus
Review:
mwawawawawa, the doctor, indeed :-)
Wonder who was the owner.... mmmmh, interesting.
Wuillow still has a lot to learn to be able to disable the alarms, it seems :/
Comments from author:
The owner appeared in the season 1 episode of Dr. Who entitled, "Dalek". If you haven't seen it, I highly recommend you do so. Fantastic episode, really sold me on the show as a whole. And as for Willow's inability to disable the alarms, well I figure van Statten was using reverse-engineered alien technology. Something our favorite red-headed witch hadn't seen before.
Review of chapter "The Life of Reilly" from arkeus
Review:
This seriously rock :-) You have much improved since the beginning of your veronica mars crossover (who i couldn't manag to read). Great job.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you think I've improved. I'm also sorry you didn't like the start of that story. I admit it's ridiculously amaturish, but it does get better. (At least I thinks so. Others might disagree.) Any and all improvement I've made was because of my continued work on that story. It gave me the confidence to start this one.
That was a bit on the good side - I like how you're writing the personalities of the main characters. For some reason your treasure hunt is making me think of Monty Python & The Holy Grail. Do you have any killer rabbits on the way, or Vampires who say 'Ni!' ?
Comments from author:
Sorry, but I'm not familiar enough with Monty Python to do it justice. However, I do consider the comparison to be a high honor. Thank you very much.
Review By [jrabbit] • Date [17 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meandering About" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Awesome story so far.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you think so. Thanks for taking the time to read it. I hope to hear from you as I post more. Peace out! Yo.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [16 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
oooo, intriguing. treasurehunter!scoobies are my new favorite kind!
hope to see more soon.
Comments from author:
First of all, let me just say excellent use of an exclamation point after treasurehunter. Second, thank you for the favorable words. I'm glad you enjoyed the first part of the story, and I hope you enjoy the rest of it as well. Just as soon as I get it to you.