Great story, the editing is a bit rocky in places but the story itself is first rate. I love the idea of Buffy not really being Buffy, I love the Xander as a good vampire concept. Huge crossover goodness with everything under the sun. Thanks for a ripping good story!
Review By [tchizek] • Date [25 Oct 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Hmm, this is marked as complete. Is that it, or is there a sequel? Hmm, I'll check your profile. At any rate, this is a really great story. Good job. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [9 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Pretty interesting idea and set up. I do feel this story was more then a little rushed though, tons of important events are just explained away in a brief sentence or two. The story could of also benefited from either less cross overs and less characters being introduced.. or a much longer story with possible sequels.
Over all it was a pretty good idea but it had way to much information in to little time. It felt more like reading the cliff notes or an outline of an idea then reading a real fleshed out story.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [30 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review By [ktweaver] • Date [10 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from SpacedCadet
Review:
A fun story!
I think the number of crossovers you used really needed a longer story, or a number of stories, each building on what had been established previously, but I reallyenjoyed this.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Not Rated
he allowed his body to shift back to undead mode and heal is 3rd degree sunburn and he felt a little better but still cranky.
It's a great line, but a 3rd degree sunburn would mean he was only one step away from bursting into flame and he's not that stupid. Either you need to explain why he stayed in direct sunlight even tho he was taking severe damage, or it should be something on the order of a severe 2nd degree sunburn.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Interesting story if a little complex in the amount of crossovers you brought in and some for only a split second. Glad Xander kept his soul and loved the emails he sent in the last chapter.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [4 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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