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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LFW
Review:
It starts out fine, goes to cruel and then darn funny

Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [26 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kumoatsu
Review:
Oh hek yeah please continue!
Review By [Kumoatsu] • Date [16 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
I'll give you a review after I get done laughing myself so silly I can't type.
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [2 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KnifeHand
Review:
Awesome. Loved how you turned him into John. Would love to see the back story, how Sunnydale got wasted, the military involvement, how Xander got cursed. If you don't feel like writing it, send an outline and I'll gladly have a crack at it.

Knife Hand
Review By [KnifeHand] • Date [10 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bumpkin
Review:
*blink* *blink* ....ummm.... ?!!?!?!!!!


LOL! OMG, this was too funny!!! And the way they would have interacted (jon/x and vet/f) would have been exactly right too! Just too good! Thank you so much for sharing this little twisted bit of fluff - I am still snickering...

keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect
Review By [Bumpkin] • Date [2 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Christy
Review:
interesting concept.
Review By [Christy] • Date [7 Jul 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Awwww....

Explains them exactly, doesn't explain Nermal ;)

I can see, several years down the road, Garfield and Odie finding some clue to Jon's past, hijacking a very small UFO and going on an extreme road trip as they try to fix the problem :D

Hey, are Grandma and Docboy undercover agents or just a nice rural family that were paid to have their memories altered? :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [23 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
Review:
Is pretty good.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [19 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elric
Review:
Ok you got me. I did not expect that twist and I love that Faith is going to be watching him.
Review By [Elric] • Date [18 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from exqurere
Review:
Hilarious! Very funny idea,
Review By [exqurere] • Date [18 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Duken
Review:
This drabble is made of 100% pure WIN.

Great twist too, never saw it coming.
Review By [Duken] • Date [17 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cmdruhura
Review:
Have you sought out psycholgical help for your dementia? Check out Dr. F. Crane. He hasn't been doing much lately.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [17 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Tabee
Review:
*snort*

oh god, that's hilarious!

man, the thought of Faith as Liz is goina crack me up all day!

this was fantastic :)
Comments from author:
You are now never going to be able to look at Liz without picturing her in tight leather with a stake - BWUAHAHAHA!
Review By [Tabee] • Date [17 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from QOShea
Review:
This was hilarious. *snicker*
Review By [QOShea] • Date [17 Jun 07] • Not Rated
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