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Review of chapter "Raspberry Mochas" from NPetrenko
Review:
Lovely story.
Review By [NPetrenko] • Date [27 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Raspberry Mochas" from dinkscythe
Review:
Adorable! Loved this!
Review By [dinkscythe] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Podfic Link" from Ansku
Review:
Sweet :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [25 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Podfic Link" from Mierke
Review:
You captured them both perfectly - I just can see Booth getting more nervous with every time Zack asked one of his questions! And Zack's lines were perfect, just absolutely Zack.
Review By [Mierke] • Date [30 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Podfic Link" from neris
Review:
Wonderful.
The idea of Booth with Zach never crossed my mind, but now I don't know why. Though you have to admit, that it does sound a bit strange
Usually I like longer fics and tend to avoid ones less than 1k words, because they start telling a story and omit the conclusion leaving an impression that the author was to lazy to finish it or that they had no idea how to do it. I don't need some happily ever after. I mean why take part in a race if you know that there is no finish line.
But your story is just awesome. You tell the whole story without adding unimportant details and at the same time adding enough to show what you wanted to tell.
Simple idea, perfectly written. Short, to the point and making me wish that there were more people who could write like this.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your kind words--you totally made me blush! It is strange to think about Booth and Zach together, but that story just begged me to write it (bothering me night and day for a long time) and I'm glad you found it. Thanks for giving it a try!
Review By [neris] • Date [29 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Podfic Link" from Califaction
Review:
Sweet! Zack/Booth goodness! I always feel alone shipping this particular ship, so it's good to know that there are other Bones slashers out there. Zack's dialogue was totally on the mark--the whole situation was perfect. "I'm not good at painting." "Why are we back at step one?" Snerk! Booth was a sweetheart, and remarkably patient, but I think that he'd have thought long and hard before deciding to pursue Zack, so maybe it's not that surprising. I love the way you managed to capture Zack and Booth's characters--every nuance and inflection seemed like them. I'm a sucker for a happy ending. When Booth said, "I won't tell you to shut up," I just about squeed from happiness. It's such a telling example of their relationship.
Thanks for writing and posting!
Comments from author:
Thank you for all the kind words. I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [Califaction] • Date [24 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Raspberry Mochas" from eponine
Review:
I read this way back when and thought it was cute, but didn't really get it cuz I'd only seen a few episodes of the show. Now that I've been watching it obsessively, I adore this fic beyond words. Awesome characterization, fantastic dialog, and a plot that's cuter than a monkey with a dog.

Also, having seen the season finale, there's one line in this fic that ALMOST MADE ME CRY. F@#$ing cannon jossing important and beloved character traits right out the window. XP Mr. Yuck Means NO! {/rant}
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing. I'm glad you liked it! And yes, damn cannon for messing about with characters that they shouldn't be messing with! It was wrong, wrong damn it!

Out of curiosity, which line affected you?
Review By [eponine] • Date [24 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Raspberry Mochas" from purrfus
Review:
Wonderful characterization and fantastic dialog.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [27 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Raspberry Mochas" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
I don't like the last line of the fic. I think he's promising too much. The sentiment's good, but I can see him regretting it later.

Other than that, very cool :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [24 Sep 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Raspberry Mochas" from ColourBlack
Review:
I loved it! You captured Zach so perfectly, I could actually see him saying all that on an actual episode.

Please write a sequel or companion piece or something.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. = ] I have two more Zach/Booth pieces in the works that will be posted in the beginning of July...so soon!
Review By [ColourBlack] • Date [20 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Raspberry Mochas" from SailAweigh
Review:
Oh, my. That last line made me hoot. Zach, ah, Zach. Paint-by-numbers relationship. I just hope Booth didn't have to tab parts when they were in bed.
Comments from author:
*laughs* I'm glad you enjoyed it. I love that last line too.
Review By [SailAweigh] • Date [19 Jun 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Raspberry Mochas" from GrotesquFantasy
Review:
omg, that was funny i laughed the whole time. you gut the characters down pretty good.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed.
Review By [GrotesquFantasy] • Date [19 Jun 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Raspberry Mochas" from AnnOfMidnight
Review:
Cute, but not ridiculously so. I mean, they could be like that.
Comments from author:
THey totally could be like that! Thanks for commenting, I appreciate it.
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [18 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Raspberry Mochas" from (Past Donor)GACTsevil
Review:
That was cute.
Review By [(Past Donor)GACTsevil] • Date [17 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Raspberry Mochas" from amusewithaview
Review:
*Giggles Insanely*

Oh, that was ridiculous. I would NEVER think something like this was possible, but you kept them both completely in-character. I ESPECIALLY loved your version of Zach, and Booth's exasperation...

This was wonderful! Danke
Comments from author:
*smiles happily*

I'm glad you enjoyed. I was hoping people thought I kept them in character. I've never really written Bones Slash, and I wasn't sure how to go about doing it. And then I read an article in some magazine about coffee dates, and it just hit me.

And I'm especially glad you liked the characterization of Zach. I wasn't sure if I got his voice down correctly.
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [17 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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