I'm not a big Willow fan but I like this story. You did a great job of a believable way those two could get together. The thing is John isn't really that old if you look at him and by the time the series was over Willow wasn't a teenager and I think would have been older than Dean.
Great job!
For your reward I have created a story banner for this first part of the series. You can see it here: http://www.tthfanfic.org/story.php?no=15215&;chapter=36 . If you like the codes email me and I will gladly send the code so you can added it to your story.
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Actually Dean is a few years older, but it doesn't really matter, age is something I no longer look at since Im past 25 myself. I think they would make a likable couple, they both have lost someone they cared for, and they both went on a vengence for revenge.
They relate so well I could not pass up writing something about it.
Love the banner sooo much.... now how do I put it up?
Review By [TexasAries] • Date [23 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Very enjoyable story. I liked how you delved into John's character, and I loved the somewhat sombre tone in the story. It fit very well with the story you told. Nice idea, to focus on the things that John and Willow have in common, despite how different they may appear at first glance.
I really enjoyed the fic. I haven't read any Willow/John fics but thought it worked well. They have a lot in common. Are you thinking of writing more? I would love to read more.
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