Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from chrysanthemum
Awesome story. I was about to write that I hope you come back to it someday, but I think it ended on a high note, so I'll just stick with thanks for writing such a fun story!
Review By [chrysanthemum
] • Date [3 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from tryingtobestine
This was fun, a bit weird, but fun
Review By [tryingtobestine
] • Date [13 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Vickzie
Loving the story
Review By [Vickzie
] • Date [21 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from mariegilbert
I really do like this even though its been years since you last updated...it has the toucing "girly feeling" moments...and then a great amount of comedy in it too :) I hope you continue to write this soon!
Review By [mariegilbert
] • Date [16 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Darksidhe
I know that you haven't posted anything more on this story in about 3 years, but I do so love it.
Review By [Darksidhe
] • Date [20 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from feuerfliege
Just reread that for like the fourth time or something. Still love it. Still hoping for an update ... ;-)
Review By [feuerfliege
] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from thedogman
I love this story and hope you plan on continuing it.
Review By [thedogman
] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from PSchri
Wow!!! Amazing, wonderful story!
I truly enjoyed reading it, I read it all in one sitting. I liked how you started off a bit slow, rather than jumping into Dawn/Mary meeting the Winchesters. I thought it was well done, how you characterized them (i.e. suspicious, pessimistic). I also liked that you brought a bit of Dawn's world in, via Angel and Willow, and phonecalls with other friends.
Though, it's strange that they just accepted Willow as a good witch, when they truly believe all witches are evil.
I also enjoyed your story because it made me laugh at several parts, but I also felt for Dawn/Mary and John.
I would be glad to see it continue, but where it is now is a good possible ending. Thank-you for sharing your writing with us.
Review By [PSchri
] • Date [8 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from FireWolfe
Strange but interesting. I would love to see more if you ever feel like coming back to this story. I can actually almost see Dawn as mary. I not sure I like her falling into the new idenity so fast and seeing to leave the other Dawn behind but the fic show well developed plots and I like it.
Review By [FireWolfe
] • Date [31 Mar 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Bluejello
Hmmm, I don't suppose some serious begging could get this story revived? It's worth a shot anyway...
*insert puppy-dog eyes here*
Really, the ideas are excellent and the characters are all very well written. I'm impressed with how you deal with Dawn/Mary.
Review By [Bluejello
] • Date [27 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Katt
I am SO glad you are writing again! I hope you can update some of these older stories. You have always been one of my favorite writers!
Review By [Katt
] • Date [26 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from willowbee
Review By [willowbee
] • Date [28 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from LeaFairy
I absolutely love this story! The plot of Dawn being Mary.. er.. Mary's soul, is completely original and unique! I've never read anything like it before.
I thought Dawn's reaction to regaining her memories of Mary (John and the boys) and her trying to stay away from them because she was afraid of how they would react, was really well written. *claps* I also loved John's and the boys different reactions to finding out the truth of Dawn being Mary... Sam completely accepting, John running away for awhile and Dean's closing off emotionally. All of it was well done!
Willow's fight with the YED was great and I'm glad that he's gone for now... but I so can't wait till he comes back and the fight that will happen. *grins*
I really like how you are combining both Mary and Dawn... Both of their personalities blending together perfectly. I'm also loving her being a mom to Sam and Dean. It's so sweet and funny too... Especially the sex stuff with John and them being groused out by their parents. *giggles*
Their first hunt together as a family was awesome! I totally loved how possessive John was. Very hot. It was also very cute how worried the boys and John were for her. Aw.
I really adore this story and I hope you update again cause I would love to read more! Anyways, thanks for writing!!
Review By [LeaFairy
] • Date [1 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from AshDawnSoulmates
Please update soon! Heck please start updating all your stories again!!! I'm going crazy missing them!
Review By [AshDawnSoulmates
] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from somethintosay
Love this story to pieces!!
It's such a great concept, and you write the Winchesters so well.
I can't wait for an update!
Review By [somethintosay
] • Date [28 Jun 09] • Not Rated