Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from BerserkerNW
Review:
Oh cute! Poor Doyle, he was freaking out about being strapped down in a military facility, why does it never occur to people that waking up restrained would be a little freaksome? >_<
Wonderful story, and I really enjoyed how we only got Doyle's perspective of events. Thanks for sharing this!
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [14 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Too bad your obsession with Doyle didn't last. Doyle and O'Neill - oh my.
Comments from author:
Heh, actually I still find this story interesting but I ran out of free time. I might make a sequel someday, or a continuation, but for now I'm simply too busy.
Review By [dugleikoo] • Date [19 Jul 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Very glad you're continuing with this, and that Doyle's reception seems a bit less hostile, now (restraints notwithstanding). Can't wait to see what comes next.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [1 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Really liking this. Doyle in O'Neill's world could be a lot of fun.
Review By [JennyLal] • Date [30 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from VillageOrchid
Review:
A little confused. Is Doyle still all gray and spikey? (Is that what you mean by haven't changed back.. or do you mean that he flashed gray and spikey but hasn't changed back to that form again... looking still human?) Dramatically liking this.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Well, I don't have any bright ideas to share with you and your muse. Usually, I just handle the consumption of the fics, not the creation ;) Anyway, thanks for the update.
I to wonder, though: is Doyle in the same dimension or reality he was before? And, he still has yet to determine why and how he ended up where he is. I would say that it required some "divine" intervention. Thanks again, I hope someone else is able to fire up the muse ;)
