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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from BerserkerNW
Review:
Oh cute! Poor Doyle, he was freaking out about being strapped down in a military facility, why does it never occur to people that waking up restrained would be a little freaksome? >_<

Wonderful story, and I really enjoyed how we only got Doyle's perspective of events. Thanks for sharing this!
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [14 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from SingolloLomien
Review:
I really like this story and I think it would be cool if you continued it someday.
Review By [SingolloLomien] • Date [5 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from SpacedCadet
Review:
This works very well...and cries out for more stories of Doyle at the SGC.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [4 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from purrfus
Review:
Too bad your obsession with Doyle didn't last. Doyle and O'Neill - oh my.
Comments from author:
Heh, actually I still find this story interesting but I ran out of free time. I might make a sequel someday, or a continuation, but for now I'm simply too busy.

Thanks for the comment!
Review By [purrfus] • Date [6 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from banner
Review:
This is interesting and *different.* I always loved Doyle, and his ... unorthodox ... personality would fit beautifully in the SGC.
Review By [banner] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from dugleikoo
Review:
I like it, although it makes me miss Doyle
Review By [dugleikoo] • Date [19 Jul 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Very glad you're continuing with this, and that Doyle's reception seems a bit less hostile, now (restraints notwithstanding). Can't wait to see what comes next.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [1 Jul 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from JennyLal
Review:
Really liking this. Doyle in O'Neill's world could be a lot of fun.
Review By [JennyLal] • Date [30 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from VillageOrchid
Review:
A little confused. Is Doyle still all gray and spikey? (Is that what you mean by haven't changed back.. or do you mean that he flashed gray and spikey but hasn't changed back to that form again... looking still human?) Dramatically liking this.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Nyn
Review:
I'd love to see more of this. Right now it feels like you just wrote the introduction of a story. I hope you continue!
Review By [Nyn] • Date [30 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from manic
Review:
Well, I don't have any bright ideas to share with you and your muse. Usually, I just handle the consumption of the fics, not the creation ;) Anyway, thanks for the update.

I to wonder, though: is Doyle in the same dimension or reality he was before? And, he still has yet to determine why and how he ended up where he is. I would say that it required some "divine" intervention. Thanks again, I hope someone else is able to fire up the muse ;)
Review By [manic] • Date [30 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from link
Review:
Like it so far. Janet is quite perceptive when she saw how Doyle look at the restrain. Post more okay.
Review By [link] • Date [29 Jun 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from FlitShadowflame
Review:
i don't feel like it's finished, though :(
Review By [FlitShadowflame] • Date [29 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from FlitShadowflame
Review:
yay! you wrote more!
Review By [FlitShadowflame] • Date [29 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Is Doyle having a problem shifting back to his "normal" face?
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [29 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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